The Rapunzel-Princess of the Flying Trapeze

Suspended with roses, a garter and courage. Her wispy white costume blows in the breeze. Silky vibrations as she sways her bodice — the Rapunzel-princess of the swinging trapeze. Brunette hair and outfit bound with pearls and lace. High with Magellanic clouds, marvelous outlander of earth. Slender fingers wrapped around the seraphic twine. Daughter of the heavens, from the day a trouper gave birth. One...two...three, the excitement sounds, the air surfeits about like maddening faerie dust. The open sky burns with eccentric flame - crowd applauding like cherry bombs. The darling of the sky, entices every cent she earns. This rapturous virgin makes love to the dawn. Her stupendous feat goes on and on, drawing in oohs and ahhs...the climax as her knees hang vaingloriously from the seat, outlawing the silver and gold wings that flutter about outside the circus tent, as this beauty shines upside-down like an albinotic bat, frenetically stirring the breeze… waving from the vines. 7/29/2019

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Date: 7/30/2019 1:20:00 PM
I'm with W.W. I really like this one, but I do know why. I love the flying trapeze above all other circus acts, and love the imagery you fashioned around Rapunzel. Nicely done, Kim. Thanks, gw
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Date: 7/30/2019 8:41:00 AM
Don't know why...but I really like this one Kimmy...I know, it's frick$#$^&*&^ good...great description...a fav my friend...sending #@#$#@!$#@%$ LOL...^WW^ :o)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2019 10:17:00 AM
Winged Warrior...you are freaking hilarious! Hugs...Kim
Date: 7/29/2019 8:51:00 PM
wow, outstanding poetry Kim,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2019 8:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Pixie! <3 Kim
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