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The Rainy-Day Butterfly Collab

Squinting bush brown fertility depends upon the rain. Bright-eyed with possibility, a vigorous refrain. ~ The eyespot-wings are glorious with great downpour of storms. They’re heartier, victorious - This leading male performs. ~ 3/24/2023 Collaborate With Me Sponsor: Joanna Daniel Syllable count: 8/6/8/6 8/6/8/6 Rhyming pattern: abab abab Used howmanysyllables and rhymezone Theme: Nature

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Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/24/2023 10:54:00 AM

A spectacular poem, Kim. I am looking forward to the blooming of flowers and butterflies fluttering in my backyard. Enjoy your day dear. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 12:44:00 PM

I really appreciate you, Fin! :) Thank you! Happy Spring!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 12:41:00 PM

I really appreciate you, Fin! :) Thank you! Happy Spring!

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/24/2023 7:52:00 AM

Oh yes, this is really nice, Kim. Looks like Joanna is going to have her work cut out finishing all of these poems:) A very light and well written poem. Good luck:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 8:39:00 AM

Thank you so much!! Have a blessed day, Daniel!

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/24/2023 6:59:00 AM

Hi Kim, You did a good job with the contest theme. I love Nature and Spring is my favorite season of the year. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 8:40:00 AM

Be blessed, dear one! Thank you!