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The Raindrop

Lingering its wicked spell The summer heat wave Overstays its welcome Bidding a long overdue adieu When finally heaven sent That first raindrop Splatters on my face AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on April 11, 2019 for contest APRIL 2019 PREMIER 3 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 2ND and November 21, 2018 for contest THE RAINDROP sponsored by CRAIG CORNISH

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/14/2019 6:07:00 PM

Beautifully expressed through lovely imagery, Line. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/14/2019 7:07:00 AM

Big Congrats to win top.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/14/2019 8:04:00 AM

Thanks, Anisha. Much appreciated.

L. J. Carber

Date: 4/13/2019 10:03:00 AM

Nicely done! and congrats on your win, Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/13/2019 10:27:00 AM

Thanks, LJ. Much appreciated.

P.M. Richter

Date: 4/13/2019 9:58:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Line ~ love the imagery :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/13/2019 10:27:00 AM

Thanks, PM, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/22/2018 4:55:00 PM

I really like this, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/22/2018 10:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Janice. Most appreciated.

Constance La France

Date: 11/22/2018 4:15:00 PM

Line, very nice for the contest, best of luck ~

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/22/2018 4:41:00 PM

Thanks, Constance. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/22/2018 7:12:00 AM

Well done, my friend, well done indeed! I can feel it, and it is heaven-sent.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/22/2018 8:25:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. Reminds me how in my poetry I try to do away with as much punctuation, including hyphenation, as I can. LOL