The Rainbow Emerged

the jaded grey sky
after the incessant cry~
shed a last tear drop

the graceful sun god
perceived insipid sky's mood~
radiantly grinned

wiped out his tear drop
embraced gently, cheered him up~
the rainbow emerged
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Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 10:28 AM
Ahhh, such lovely personification.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 3:44 AM
Splendor of imagery that captivate the mind, my dearest, Supraja! Blessings.
Horsman Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 10:34 PM
All three are beautiful haiku.
Zahid Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 6:43 AM
Slowly and gracefully it emerged. Well Penned. Vivid imagery. blessings Kannan
George Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 4:50 AM
How beautifully you have threaded these picturesque haikus to make a rainbow ! Lovely imagination.... Supraja! Definitely my FAV
Proxenos Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 6:56 AM
Every time I see a rainbow from today I shall remember these 3 lovely verses. Wonderful write Supraja. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
Kannan Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 3:00 AM
So sweet of you... Thanks a lot for stopping by...
Buhagiar Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 7:27 AM
softly, softly done it. Enjoyed.
Kannan Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 2:59 AM
Thank you so much... Glad you like it...
Pandit Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 6:40 AM
Beautiful progression of linked haiku poems--lovely imagery that informs how nature inscribes a rainbow.
Kannan Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 2:59 AM
Thank you so much... So glad you liked it...
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