The Rainbow Emerged

the jaded grey sky
after the incessant cry~
shed a last tear drop

the graceful sun god
perceived insipid sky's mood~
radiantly grinned

wiped out his tear drop
embraced gently, cheered him up~
the rainbow emerged

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Date: 5/29/2022 10:28:00 AM
Ahhh, such lovely personification.
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Date: 5/28/2022 3:44:00 AM
Splendor of imagery that captivate the mind, my dearest, Supraja! Blessings.
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Date: 5/25/2022 10:34:00 PM
All three are beautiful haiku.
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Date: 5/23/2022 6:43:00 AM
Slowly and gracefully it emerged. Well Penned. Vivid imagery. blessings Kannan
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Date: 5/23/2022 4:50:00 AM
How beautifully you have threaded these picturesque haikus to make a rainbow ! Lovely imagination.... Supraja! Definitely my FAV
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Date: 5/22/2022 6:56:00 AM
Every time I see a rainbow from today I shall remember these 3 lovely verses. Wonderful write Supraja. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 5/23/2022 3:00:00 AM
So sweet of you... Thanks a lot for stopping by...
Date: 5/20/2022 7:27:00 AM
softly, softly done it. Enjoyed.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 5/23/2022 2:59:00 AM
Thank you so much... Glad you like it...
Date: 5/20/2022 6:40:00 AM
Beautiful progression of linked haiku poems--lovely imagery that informs how nature inscribes a rainbow.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 5/23/2022 2:59:00 AM
Thank you so much... So glad you liked it...
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