The Rain Taps Upon My Window

When nightfall descends and the rains tap upon my window how do I know the light will come again how do I know tomorrow will just not stall and I will be stuck stuck with thoughts written down in fairy books perhaps becoming a prophet pulling punches a top a Mary Poppins but stop the theives still rape the night pillaging with their spilt ales and self-induced wails oh but the horrors the night brings the window taps get louder now sleep checks on the clock but fails to blink seconds turn to hours —it feels like days the shadows play tricks silhouettes stalk my being my mind won't slow it's racing towards the finish line Is that where the answers lie as yesterdays have already lied to me in false promises sedated sits hope never again living lost in a lucid dream or so it seems ..... the here, the now, the know a one act play putting on her show jumping in with both feet my thoughts are wet with wonder trapped in the spell I'm under trip, fall, come see it all a picture show in slow motion thru the raindrops I smell the ocean wild and free oh I long to be ... but if this candle burns and if their flickers move I'll run away, I'll run away fast deep inside with the promises yet to be held to truth the rain taps upon my window the winds brush across the trees I drift I drift I drift ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 9/24/2018 1:37:00 AM
- A truly wonderful poem, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2018 11:00:00 PM
And I say- let the rain softly linger, as thoughts drift around everything. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. ~ Brandy
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Date: 9/14/2018 12:53:00 PM
Tim, wonderful write.. emotions, thoughts, and waiting, but don't drift to far :) . Thank you for your loving condolence. Hugs eve
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Date: 9/14/2018 7:28:00 AM
I agree with Chris...he stole my thunder lol...Awesomeness! here...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 9/13/2018 9:15:00 PM
I have read this a few times, love the poem and its twists, I am not even sure, however I see many layers to this, and a poem that makes us think twice, very well written.
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Date: 9/13/2018 6:54:00 AM
Excellent Tim. I was fully pulled into this one. Very well done :)
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Date: 9/12/2018 8:49:00 PM
Holy smokes, Tim Tam Man! This is brilliant work. Budgie /|\
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Date: 9/12/2018 4:25:00 PM
Masterful Tim!! hard to say but I think you're...improving? Maybe I'm just seduced by the lyrical feel of this one!
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Date: 9/12/2018 3:48:00 PM
Exceptional poem...I can almost see the poet drifting away...Awesome ..
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Date: 9/12/2018 1:55:00 PM
This is by far one of your best pieces my friend. This is epic and so beautifully done. It has a little bit of everything in it and the ending is superb.
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