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The Rain On My Glasses

The rain on my glasses I see it, so magnified Each droplet, a crystal Gliding Upon the wall of my mind, On every lens, A waterfall, a river, A stream In the rear, I stand Pondering As if in a marvelous dream. The rain on my glasses I see it, so magnified Each droplet, A spring inundating The arid ground of my mind Through every lens, A world drenched, colored, Surreal In the rear, I stand Pondering As if I have just begun to feel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/13/2010 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on going on into the second round...Sara
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Date: 11/10/2010 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Farah. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2010 12:15:00 PM
Congrats Farah. on the featured write. Vince
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Date: 10/21/2010 7:46:00 AM
Farah, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Farah. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2010 5:54:00 PM
Farah I know the feeling with each droplet that falls on our lens is like painted rainbows in the clouds transformed by our vision sent down with the good Lords tears for us to embrace from Heaven and honestly there is nothing that can be more calming or refreshing then feeling the rain on our skin as it falls down from Heaven, Thank you for sharing your soul prints in poetry with all of us here in the poetry community because I thoroughly enjoyed my visit here with you today, Sincerely Dean
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:44:00 AM
A Gem of a poem. It was rejuvenating. cheers suresh
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Date: 4/23/2010 5:23:00 AM
am enjoying this gem again! Farah! I feel lightheaded about halfway thru this poem, everytime I read it! .....cool effect! and thanks, Farah, for your generous comparisons to Robert Frost! I wish!!!! love, jamesy
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Date: 4/22/2010 3:27:00 AM
a unique style of write on your hands, a few poets can use there imagination this way. a good way to express the eye opening to a new feeling you left behind, nice nice ..p.d
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Date: 4/15/2010 3:30:00 PM
Yes, this is original and beautiful, farah! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/15/2010 5:10:00 AM
beautiful-Charma
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Date: 4/15/2010 4:35:00 AM
original! refreshing! jimbo
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Date: 4/15/2010 3:52:00 AM
Sorry for the typo Farah ! "you" james
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Date: 4/15/2010 3:51:00 AM
Oh yes...ypu do have a gift ! TY for sharing Farah ! I'll have to indulge further ! james
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Date: 4/10/2010 11:21:00 PM
Wow.. I can't stop admiring you.. can anyone? I miss you, Keep inspiring the world..
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Date: 4/4/2010 10:49:00 AM
I am amazed at your poetry. Truly dumbfounded. Your intelligence, and insight are a thing of wonder. Something else that blows my mind is you are writing all of this at such a young age. Have you ever read or heard of Arthur Rimbaud?
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Date: 3/23/2010 6:17:00 PM
They do sometimes need windshield wipers ... LOL ... still waiting for my e-mail but I guess you're onto other things now. Hope school is going well and keep up the great writes here at the Soup!!
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Date: 3/9/2010 12:05:00 PM
You are and this poem are so beautiful. Love to a dear genius, Sara
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Date: 3/8/2010 2:19:00 PM
very good one i liked it, it reminded me of how i look at the rain on the car windows when we drive, i also loved how you pretty much said you see the world in your own unique way. Jo
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Date: 3/7/2010 8:37:00 AM
I love how you use simplicity in your writing, how that metaphors are based into your writing that makes me ponder a lot. I am completely awed. Keep them going farah, will never stop to be inspired =) Love, Sami.
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Date: 3/5/2010 10:45:00 PM
This is brilliant!
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Date: 3/4/2010 12:20:00 PM
Good use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Much for the reader to think about in your poem. The emotion comes though your words. Good one! Thank you for your comment on my poem. Karen
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Date: 3/4/2010 7:34:00 AM
I can feel with you, Farah wearing myself glasses! Very nice Rhyme you have posted. And thank you for your comment! Have a nice week. Gert
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Date: 3/4/2010 6:05:00 AM
thanks for comment there is pure world to come
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Date: 3/4/2010 12:40:00 AM
Nice work Farah.Rgds Brian & thank for your welcome comments.
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