Anne E Sangster - K Poet Rhyme

The Rain Clouds

Waking up to heavy clouds of dark grey
Inside her head they loom there all day 
Pools of salty water fill her despondent eyes
Streams of tears cascade as she silently cries
Perhaps the rain clouds will all dissipate tomorrow
And some sunlight will chase away the sorrow

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Linda Alice Fowler February 27, 2023 at 7:54 AM Beautifully rhymed and flowing Anne. Reminds me of an exchange from MIB II that is something like - Laura: "A lot of people are sad when it rains." Agent Kay: "It rains because you're sad, baby." :) Anne E Sangster - K February 27, 2023 at 8:02 AM Thank you again Linda for your visit and kind feedback :-) I haven't seen MIB II but will have to check it out sometime :-)

Andrea Dietrich August 24, 2022 at 1:57 PM I enjoyed your small heartfelt poem, Anne. Anne E Sangster - K August 24, 2022 at 3:16 PM Thank you Andrea and enjoy the rest of your day. Cheers my friend :-)

Charles Messina August 24, 2022 at 2:50 AM Aww...so sad. Anne. Hopefully the sun has come and dried up all the salty rain. Hope all is well...hugs Charlie Anne E Sangster - K August 24, 2022 at 4:57 AM Hi Charlie, Thank you so much for your visit today. Wishing you a beautiful day. Cheers my friend :-)

Ann Peck August 14, 2022 at 4:56 PM So sad, Anne. I hope the sunshine will find her soon. Anne E Sangster - K August 15, 2022 at 8:50 AM Thank you so much Ann. Your kindness and visit are more appreciated than you know. Cheers my friend :-)