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The Rain Clouds

Waking up to heavy clouds of dark grey Inside her head they loom there all day Pools of salty water fill her despondent eyes Streams of tears cascade as she silently cries Perhaps the rain clouds will all dissipate tomorrow And some sunlight will chase away the sorrow

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/27/2023 7:54:00 AM

Beautifully rhymed and flowing Anne. Reminds me of an exchange from MIB II that is something like - Laura: "A lot of people are sad when it rains." Agent Kay: "It rains because you're sad, baby." :)

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 2/27/2023 8:02:00 AM

Thank you again Linda for your visit and kind feedback :-) I haven't seen MIB II but will have to check it out sometime :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2022 1:57:00 PM

I enjoyed your small heartfelt poem, Anne.

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/24/2022 3:16:00 PM

Thank you Andrea and enjoy the rest of your day. Cheers my friend :-)

Charles Messina

Date: 8/24/2022 2:50:00 AM

Aww...so sad. Anne. Hopefully the sun has come and dried up all the salty rain. Hope all is well...hugs Charlie

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/24/2022 4:57:00 AM

Hi Charlie, Thank you so much for your visit today. Wishing you a beautiful day. Cheers my friend :-)

Ann Peck

Date: 8/14/2022 4:56:00 PM

So sad, Anne. I hope the sunshine will find her soon.

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/15/2022 8:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Ann. Your kindness and visit are more appreciated than you know. Cheers my friend :-)