The Rain

Staring into a cloudless sky
I feel the rain begin to pour
Wearing a raincoat
He splashes in the puddles
Mouth open
Raindrops dances on his tongue
I stare into Venus
Until the storm subsides
Free her mind
A storm will follow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 1, 2012 at 7:25 PM
That's quite a poem! Well done. No shelter from this storm. warm thoughts, Ralph
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