The Rain

The rain…does it flow Open drops do fall downward A springtime event Russell Sivey Entrant into Francine Roberts' "Spring Rain" contest 5/7/2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2012 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Spring Rain" contest Russell. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 5/19/2012 2:21:00 AM

Russell congrats on your win..David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/19/2012 1:47:00 AM

Congratulations Russell xx

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/18/2012 10:23:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Russell with what was most definitely the shortest entry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2012 8:06:00 PM

HI, again, Gosh I have missed a lot of your recent work, Russell. Good luck in the contest here.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/8/2012 5:30:00 AM

The best to you in the contest Russell. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/7/2012 7:23:00 PM

Nicely done, Russell. What is spring without a little rain? Good luck with this delightful entry!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/7/2012 2:53:00 PM

ohh my, russell.. just the vivid image of "open drops" marks the sheer beauty of this piece... betting on this one for a win, dear friend... grreat stuff!.. huggs to you! :)

David Williams

Date: 5/7/2012 1:56:00 PM

Russell great spring senryu..David