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The Rain

The Rain
When the spring bursts into bloom again I come along in showers of rain Watch as I dance upon flowerbeds Aiding plants to raise their pretty heads. Listen to my rhythmic melody Whether brisk or slow my tempo be Taste me and drink me abundantly In quenching cups of coffee or tea. Luxuriate in me as you bathe I ease away body aches and pains Feel the softness of your silky skin It's I that beautifies from within. I hydrate trees so leaves grow and glow And crops grown to feed, row after row Creatures on land or those in the sea Are entirely reliant on me. There'd be no rainbows painted on sky If no rain ever fell from on high As I'm passing by in clouds of grey Thank the Lord that I am on the way. *+*+*+* 21st February 2023 In Bloom Poetry Contest Sponsored by,: Joseph May
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Peck Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Lovely poem, Belle! Rain is so elusive in our part of the land. I love your lines, "listen to my rhythmic melody, whether brisk or slow my tempo be." Nothing quite beats the sound of raindrops. Congrats!
Edmonds  Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 8:39 AM
Ann that’s so lovely of you, I love the sounds of raindrops too, pitter and pattering as they do. I pray there’ll be rain soon for you. Thank you very much ~ Belle
Kauffman Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Lovely as a soft mist of rain Belle! Here is CA every drop is a treasured blessing especially since we are in a three year drought! Congratulations on your win. Blessings of soft rain upon your fields!
Edmonds  Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 2:41 AM
Thank you Sam, I pray that CA is blessed with much needed rain soon… Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful "Rain" write. Now for the pretty flowers. Have a blessed day...............
Edmonds  Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 2:36 AM
Thank you Paula, “hearts zoom when flowers bloom” have a beautiful blessed day… Belle
Pinet Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:37 AM
This is so well-written and a pleasurable poem to read. The storyline flows smoothly and sets the pace throughout as the imagery takes you into the moment, beautiful my friend, Emile.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 6:06 PM
Thank Emile, I so appreciate your review dear friend… Belle
Poet Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 6:11 PM
A lovely and well-crafted poem, Belle. Congratulations on your top-winning placement.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 11:50 PM
Thank you very much Sotto. Belle
Buhagiar Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 1:05 AM
Lovely poem, Belle. You use the senses in a marvellous way. Hope all is well. Hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 3:48 PM
Thank you Victor, Alan came home from hospital yesterday, so things are looking up… Hugs in return, Belle
Nuwas Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 11:52 PM
A beautiful poem!
Edmonds  Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 3:45 PM
Thank you very much Aysha… Belle
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