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*This poem is based on a storm that came to NH 2 days ago 10/29/17.

The Raging River The storm had passed with cold flooding rain The river raged with the force of a racing train It rose above the covered rocks, splashed in the air It was more like a wild ocean on land everywhere It showed no mercy, would take anything away That dare to enter or fall in the aftermath this day Waterfalls spilled down cliffs on the side of the road Coming from high above, through the trees they flowed Mother Nature had dumped heavy water all around Fallen sticks, leaves and wires on saturated ground This fall storm brought winds that were fiercely strong Trees fell in the roaring gusts, like a loud broken song As the gray skies slowly moved and slipped away The river water still raged on, this unusual fall day Pale skies settled far away as if waning faintly to dim Shining on flattened leaves, with left over broken limbs People work to recover from floods and blocked roads Like the weary moving forward with a heavy load Night returns as the rain stops, with quiet reprieve To calm the raging river where peace can be retrieved Heidi Sands 10/31/17

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Date: 11/1/2017 5:18:00 AM
This is an amazing write my friend! You have masterfully expressed a raging storm to a T, with the massive flowing waters destroying everything in its path! I love the way you penned the middle stanza, that was expertly done Heidi! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/16/2017 4:49:00 PM
Hi Russell. I missed your comment on this earlier on. Thank you for your kind words :)
Date: 10/31/2017 3:54:00 PM
- A skilled and beautifully described image, Heidi - The powers of nature are huge ... a little scary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2017 3:58:00 PM
Hi Sunshine. Thank you ! Yes, the power of nature is huge certainly can be scary as the very strong wind was the other night, bringing down branches and trees. I appreciate your visit. :)
Date: 10/31/2017 2:42:00 PM
Heidi, great poem, I could feel the power of nature. This sounds like the flash floods we have here in Texas from time to time. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2017 3:33:00 PM
Hi John. It really was amazing to see the power of that river and how powerful Nature can be! We had flash floods around and further down, the river went 5 ft. above flood level. Thanks for you visit and kind comment :)
Date: 10/31/2017 12:08:00 PM
Wow Heidi... This is good...in every aspect...Congratulations ...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2017 12:14:00 PM
Hi Arturo. Thank you so much. I tried to put into writing, what I saw and experienced yesterday. I appreciate your visit and comment. Have a nice day! :)
Date: 10/31/2017 9:42:00 AM
Water is such a powerful force...Nicely penned Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2017 10:55:00 AM
Hi Joseph. Yes it is and especially coming from mountains above. I had never seen the river like this. The video tape of it roaring by is amazing. Thank you for your visit and comment :)
Date: 10/31/2017 9:37:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in your nature poem, Heidi! A picture of flooding river paints the effects on nature all around!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2017 10:54:00 AM
Hi Vijay. Thank you for your visit. The river was like I had never seen before. I even video taped the sound of it. So powerful! Have a nice day!
Date: 10/31/2017 9:15:00 AM
An excellent penning Heidi! So descriptive and emotionally impacting. Well done! xomo :)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2017 12:55:00 PM
...probably the same system :)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2017 12:54:00 PM
You did a phenomenal job! My own river low and clear as glass two days ago, today swollen in a tumultuous way.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2017 10:54:00 AM
Hi Maureen. Thank you. I tried to describe it exactly as I saw it and I had never seen the river like this! :)

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