Notes About The Poem

*This poem is based on a storm that came to NH 2 days ago 10/29/17.

The Raging River

The Raging River

The storm had passed with cold flooding rain
The river raged with the force of a racing train
It rose above the covered rocks, splashed in the air
It was more like a wild ocean on land everywhere

It showed no mercy, would take anything away
That dare to enter or fall in the aftermath this day
Waterfalls spilled down cliffs on the side of the road
Coming from high above, through the trees they flowed

Mother Nature had dumped heavy water all around
Fallen sticks, leaves and wires on saturated ground
This fall storm brought winds that were fiercely strong
Trees fell in the roaring gusts, like a loud broken song

As the gray skies slowly moved and slipped away
The river water still raged on, this unusual fall day
Pale skies settled far away as if waning faintly to dim
Shining on flattened leaves, with left over broken limbs

People work to recover from floods and blocked roads
Like the weary moving forward with a heavy load
Night returns as the rain stops, with quiet reprieve
To calm the raging river where peace can be retrieved

Heidi Sands 

10/31/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sivey Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:18 AM
This is an amazing write my friend! You have masterfully expressed a raging storm to a T, with the massive flowing waters destroying everything in its path! I love the way you penned the middle stanza, that was expertly done Heidi! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
Sands Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 4:49 PM
Hi Russell. I missed your comment on this earlier on. Thank you for your kind words :)
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 3:54 PM
- A skilled and beautifully described image, Heidi - The powers of nature are huge ... a little scary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 3:58 PM
Hi Sunshine. Thank you ! Yes, the power of nature is huge certainly can be scary as the very strong wind was the other night, bringing down branches and trees. I appreciate your visit. :)
Gondolf Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 2:42 PM
Heidi, great poem, I could feel the power of nature. This sounds like the flash floods we have here in Texas from time to time. John
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October 31, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Hi John. It really was amazing to see the power of that river and how powerful Nature can be! We had flash floods around and further down, the river went 5 ft. above flood level. Thanks for you visit and kind comment :)
Michael Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 12:08 PM
Wow Heidi... This is good...in every aspect...Congratulations ...
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 12:14 PM
Hi Arturo. Thank you so much. I tried to put into writing, what I saw and experienced yesterday. I appreciate your visit and comment. Have a nice day! :)
May Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 9:42 AM
Water is such a powerful force...Nicely penned Heidi
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 10:55 AM
Hi Joseph. Yes it is and especially coming from mountains above. I had never seen the river like this. The video tape of it roaring by is amazing. Thank you for your visit and comment :)
Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Beautiful imagery in your nature poem, Heidi! A picture of flooding river paints the effects on nature all around!
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 10:54 AM
Hi Vijay. Thank you for your visit. The river was like I had never seen before. I even video taped the sound of it. So powerful! Have a nice day!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 9:15 AM
An excellent penning Heidi! So descriptive and emotionally impacting. Well done! xomo :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 12:55 PM
...probably the same system :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 12:54 PM
You did a phenomenal job! My own river low and clear as glass two days ago, today swollen in a tumultuous way.
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 10:54 AM
Hi Maureen. Thank you. I tried to describe it exactly as I saw it and I had never seen the river like this! :)
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