The Rage

I come before you, humble and contrite,
deaf from your thunder, sightless from your bolts.
You rage, but frankly it’s a downright
anachronistic in this day - the volts,
the decibels, all of these fireworks
are for a newbie, not for someone who
once looked inside your mystery black box
and made a plain and obvious breakthrough:
we do not differ, you and me. The same
blue eyes, short beard, marital status, age,
surname, forename and patronymic name
and tendency to fall into a rage
about nothing… So, please, abate 
your fury, put aside your thundering rod,
absolve me of my sins, elucidate
your plan about me and date me, God.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/17/2019 1:14:00 AM
I am so glad that you have joined us, Kurt. You are such an asset!
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Date: 4/17/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thank you very much, Caren. I'm glad I'm welcomed here)
Date: 4/14/2019 8:04:00 AM
Thank your very much, Connie. Your comment sounds very inspiring. 1000 rays of love)
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Date: 4/14/2019 3:45:00 AM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup. I am a fan of your unique style Kurt. Your contrast of pain and power, of hungry quest lends just the right amount of mystery. This is wonderful! Aloha, Connie
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