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The Raccoon

The morning quiet It did not last long I was doing chores In another room The quiet broken Maggie growls and barks She is excited I went to see why Outside the glass door Upon the wide deck Stood a huge raccoon Eating the peanuts Then eating bird seeds He had a big feast The birds and the squirrels Ran off in a big rush From the huge raccoon They were scared of him

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Gregory Golden

Date: 4/16/2019 9:26:00 PM

Superb poem but I would like some colorful description of Mr. Raccoon Who, what, when, why, where & how stuff Overall, well done and keep sharing. Ain't God good...yes he is...all the time! Be Blessed, Greg

Gregory Golden

Date: 4/16/2019 9:25:00 PM

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/12/2019 11:45:00 AM

Good write Darlene really liked this!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2019 1:49:00 PM

Hello Gordon, thank you for your lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.I am pleased.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/11/2019 3:13:00 PM

very descriptive, Darlene, Janice--SoupMail

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2019 5:06:00 PM

Hello Janice Canerdy, Thank you for your lovely comment.They are really big up close, and scary. Have a nice day my friend.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/8/2019 7:45:00 PM

It is kind of scary...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/9/2019 12:46:00 PM

Hello Pashano Salehi, so nice to meet you.Yes it is scary to see a raccoon up close. I hope to never see the raccoon again. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Elaine George

Date: 3/7/2019 7:49:00 PM

Yes! They can be scary little creatures...especially hiding behind those little black masks. Thank you for sharing this delightful little poem. Elaine

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/8/2019 12:07:00 PM

Hello Elaine George, so nice to meet you. Yes the raccoon is scary. He was right on the wide deck eating bird seeds. Too close for my comfort. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my frkend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/7/2019 12:42:00 PM

What a lovely thing to see Darlene, no wonder Maggie was excited, saw the racoon as an invader. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/7/2019 1:45:00 PM

Hello Tom, yes Maggie saw the raccoon as an intruder on her surf. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/7/2019 10:49:00 AM

What a sight dearest Darlene! Once, camping on the top of Rosemond mountains near, Montreal, in the middle of the night I heard something approaching! The footsteps were becoming louder and louder on the dead leaves and then they stopped after that the sound of repeated sniffs caught my attention . I took my flashlight opened my tent and walked out holding a knife in my hand for I did not know what I would see! To my surprise a large Racoon stood there looking at me ! Thank God it was not a wolf! Thank you for reminding me that!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/7/2019 1:49:00 PM

Hello Trifiatis Demetrios,So you have seen a raccoon up close. I did not know they were that big.Oh yes it is a good thing it was not a wolf. You were lucky. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 3/7/2019 1:01:00 AM

As they should be, I'm scared of raccoons too.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/7/2019 1:55:00 PM

Hello Timothy, I am also scared of raccoons. It was near the patio door, So huge busy eating bird seeds. have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 3/6/2019 10:17:00 PM

They are very interesting creatures :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/7/2019 2:03:00 PM

Hello P.S. Awtry, thes creatures belong in the wild. The raccoon being on the wide deck was too close for me. Have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.