The Quiet Work

Some days the weight isn't heavy or loud,
just a fog that settles behind the eyes,
a persistent, low-hanging winter cloud
that blurs the shape of the morning skies.

We ask ourselves why we are tired or slow,
as if healing moves in a straight, clear line,
forgetting the seed buried under the snow
is working in secret before its design.

It takes courage to rest when the world demands speed,
to sit with the storm till the thunder subsides,
to listen with patience to what the heart needs,
instead of the pressure that daily decides.

You do not need to be cured by tonight,
nor prove that you’re whole to be worthy of space;
just stay in the room, let yourself see the light,
and meet your own spirit with unconditional grace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Jane Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 11:29 PM
this is beautiful!
Mashilo Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 3:31 AM
Thank you
Smith  Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 4:42 AM
This is a beautifully resonant piece, Nakang. The steady, unhurried rhythm of your ABAB quatrains perfectly mirrors the poem's central message of patience and slow healing. I especially appreciate the metaphor of the seed working in secret beneath the snow; it provides a wonderful visual for the "quiet work" we do when resting and recovering. The compassionate tone in the final stanza offers genuine comfort and a great reminder to give ourselves grace. Thank you for sharing such an uplifting and
Mashilo Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 4:57 AM
Thank you so much for this thoughtful reflection. I’m really glad the imagery of the seed beneath the snow resonated with you. Healing rarely happens on a forced timeline, so writing this was a personal reminder to honor that quiet process. I truly appreciate your kind words
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