The Question On the Mountain

It is true.
Bright and clear.
As sky blue.
Love, you are my keystone.
Forever you will be
My light when I'm alone.
A bond no force can break.
Love will always conquer.
A base no quake can shake.
My heart drips and runs like melting wax,
Comfortable beside the stone hearth.
We play some classical music tracks.
The winter sky is blue up above.
Below is the ground covered in pearl.
Nature sings songs of holiday love.
Love's always been there for all to see.
"Let me ask you on this mountain top,
Will you take my hand and marry me?" 7/29/2021 "3-6-9" Poem Emile J. Pinet
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Pinet Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations David! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, it was a difficult form to master, Emile.
Alex Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Wonderful Writing. Congratulations!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Hello David Cardamone, So nice to meetyou. if you really proposed to her, did she say Yes? It is so romantic. Enjoy your day my friend.
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