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The Queen Size Bed

“The Queen-Sized Bed”. © London F. Buss A queen-size bed was coming slowly, down the rough dirt track. As it drew closer, The wheels clumsily mounted on the base of each leg, rattled like a hospital gurney on the stones. The bed was being pushed slowly, ever so, carefully. By a weary old man in tattered clothes and worn-out shoes. as he drew closer, and closer, I saw that he was pushing his dying wife who was, lying in a dressing gown under the covers, in the Queen-Sized Bed. He pushed carefully trying not to shake the bed, excessively. His wife's head was supported by four pillows, she had wispy strings of silver white hair. She was dying. Several I.V. Bottles dangled off a hook, And dripped painkillers into her arm. She was awake but barely conscious, I wondered where they were going, but in my heart, I knew... privacy for an hour, I came back as the sun was setting. I found them together sitting on the bed, Looking over the ocean. The old man was holding his dying wife, in his arms… stroking her silver hair under the sparkling, southern cross. They were sharing her last sunset as, the dying embers of a fiery sun faded into the ocean. Night fell and I walked home alone, I had witnessed love real love, something I had never experienced, something I had never known. If you’re near Cowell and you look hard enough, You may just find the queen-size bed, with a tattered mattress and exposed springs, quietly rusting away outside a decrepit ruin of a barn. Take a closer look at the legs and you will find four rusting, gurney wheels. and if you approach quietly on a moonlit night, you will hear soft sobbing in the whistling wind, as it dreams of that dying sunset, under the southern cross... and the milky way lights up the sky, soaring into the heavens as the angels sing.

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Date: 5/14/2023 11:49:00 AM
you are a natural story teller London, i was so moved by your story especially the final stanza, exceptional poetry indeed:-) Making this a fave:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/19/2023 7:35:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I saw this in 2009, at a place called Cowell South Australia.. It was an amazing site. I'm happy that you liked this story.
Date: 3/12/2023 6:52:00 PM
London,like you, am also a novice a Poetry, however no reason for you to stick to only pietry.to stick to poetry. I know poets who write poetry, short stories and novels at another site I get tired of meaningless, banal poetry. You have deep passion, far beyond playing with words.. I envy your talent, Good show. You are indeed, a writer…..far surpassing many of us! Panagiota. FAVING your poem. You inspire me to do far better. That is a gift!..Thank you, London for thx overwhelming work
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Date: 3/12/2023 10:00:00 PM
Thanks Panagoita, I wrote a non-fiction book about the #%#^%& F.B.I it was shadow banned, it's a strange book, but it really happened.. Poetry I failed English and don't know many big words. I am an accidental writer. and I'm shocked that people like my works.. all the best.. LF.B
Date: 2/12/2023 3:58:00 PM
you have a real ability to keep the reader with you until the very last line (great closure by the way) you've got something..a very unique writing style, full of impact on the reader
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Date: 2/12/2023 6:12:00 PM
Wow Charlotte, I'm shocked, your poetry is such an inspiration. For me your poem is the most powerful poem I have ever read.. I'm really a novice when it comes to writing have a 3rd grade education and need a dictionary to read most poems. So I just write stories. from the heart.. Queen sized bed: I saw that old man pushing a bed with his dying wife under the covers, down that rough dirt track.. I had a camera with me and had no desire to photograph such a private moment. I just burned the imagery into my mind.. I was in tears when I walked back.
Date: 2/7/2023 2:03:00 PM
Wow, this is an amazing poem. The storytelling is great as is the imagery and your attention to details. FAV for sure. John
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Date: 2/7/2023 2:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, poem is non-fiction I saw this old man pushing his dying wife in a queen sized bed with gurney wheels along a dirt track..near Cowell South Australia..I tend to write stories as poems. I'm 3 grade trailer trash. and don't know many words of more than two syllables.. It would make an short movie.. Wrote a screen play in 2026.. :)

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