Darlene De Beaulieu Poet Free verse

The Puddles Freezes

On the window pane
Are raindrops starting 
Down the window panel
It is a downpour of rain

On the pavement are puddles
They begin small then
Slowly the puddles grow bigger
The air changes quickly

The puddles freezes 
Snow begins to fall
Covering the ground
Quickly with the snow

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Tony Hargreaves January 13, 2022 at 12:48 PM Darlene. Enjoyed this one. Thanks. I watch the window pane. / For we get lots of rain. / It drives some insane. /But we should not complain. Tony Darlene De Beaulieu January 13, 2022 at 3:43 PM Hello Tony Hargreaves, yes I agree. I watch the raindrops on the window pane. i also watch the ice melting on the wondwo pane. A lot of different shapes I see. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Jim Tomcatx December 17, 2021 at 5:56 AM Lovely poem with very good imagery. Darlene De Beaulieu December 17, 2021 at 12:05 PM Hello Nick V. thank you Nick, Merry Christmas all the best for the New Year. Enjoy your day my friend.

Delice Arleen Skelly December 16, 2021 at 4:04 AM Darlene,We used to love frozen water as children, making wonderful slides in the school yard...Delice Darlene De Beaulieu December 16, 2021 at 6:16 AM Hello Delice, oh! I can just picture this scene. It sounds like you had fun. Hugs.

Gershon Wolf December 14, 2021 at 7:16 PM The puddles freeze -- Pretty, but bad for my knees. ~ Arthritic Allosaur Darlene De Beaulieu December 15, 2021 at 10:28 AM Hello Gershon, a puddle freezes--would be slippery ,I would have to be very careful walking and try to avoid the puddles. I have arthritis in 5 places and i am lucky they do not hurt at the same time. Enjoy your day my friend.

Caren Krutsinger December 13, 2021 at 12:33 PM "the air changes quickly" - this is totally what happens in the midwest too. Nicely put. Darlene De Beaulieu December 14, 2021 at 11:22 AM Hello Caren, It happens her to. Thank you. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith December 13, 2021 at 9:27 AM Looks like old man winter is here for a few months. Come on spring. Stay warm. Have a blessed day................... Darlene De Beaulieu December 13, 2021 at 11:40 AM Hello Paula, old man winter is coming. Right now I am enjoying the bright green grass. The snow melted away. Hugs. Darlene

Mystic Rose Rose December 13, 2021 at 3:42 AM from rain to snow then snow to rain then sunshine and heat again dear Darlene. What a beautiful cycle God has created for us. Thank you for sharing your words today, keep well, stay inspired, with God help I know you will :) Darlene De Beaulieu December 13, 2021 at 6:42 AM Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, yes from rain to snow to rain again. Yes it is a beautiful cycle created by God. I will and you dothe same. Blessings .

Paul Callus December 12, 2021 at 9:32 AM Your wintry imagery is so vivid that I can feel the cold, Darlene. Luckily my winters are not as cold as yours. ~ Regards // paul Darlene De Beaulieu December 12, 2021 at 3:35 PM Hello Paul, You are very lucky to have warmer winters. Right now we have our grass back and looking greener than it does in summer. But i know the snow will come. Frgards Darlene

Mike Gentile December 11, 2021 at 5:47 AM Beautiful images of our wondrous nature Darlene!! Lovely thoughts are evoked! Happy Saturday xxoo Darlene De Beaulieu December 11, 2021 at 11:08 AM Hello Mike, thank you Mike for this wonderful comment. Happy Saturday. xxxx-oooo.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 10, 2021 at 12:13 PM Hi, Darlene ... what a wonderful picture you made :) - We've had a cold winter for a few weeks now - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Darlene De Beaulieu December 11, 2021 at 11:10 AM Hello Sunshine Smile, Oh - that is where the snow went. We had snow it meoted then snowed then melted. Now the grass is greener than it is in summer. Hugs.

Thomas Wells December 9, 2021 at 11:31 PM It is mysterious and magical how water freezes. This poem brings winter to life! Well done, Darlene! Darlene De Beaulieu December 10, 2021 at 11:08 AM Hello Thomas Wells, yes it is mysterious and magical how the water freezes. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your weekend my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler December 9, 2021 at 10:16 PM This is a real beauty of a poem, where the weather changes right before your eyes, Darlene. Happy holidays, Evelyn Darlene De Beaulieu December 10, 2021 at 11:09 AM Hello Evelyn, Thank you Evelyn. Happy Holidays to you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Eve Roper December 8, 2021 at 6:22 PM The days are getting colder and the rain turning into ice. Enjoyed reading. Have a wonderful Christmas. Hugs Eve Darlene De Beaulieu December 9, 2021 at 10:43 AM Hello Eve, yes the days are getting colder and the puddles are turning to ice. I do not walk well on ice. I fear to break something. Thank you. You also have a wonderful Christmas. Hugs.

Bill Baker December 8, 2021 at 4:25 PM Good winter poem, Darlene. Hugs, Bill Darlene De Beaulieu December 9, 2021 at 10:43 AM Hello Bill, Thank you Bill. Hugs.Darlene

Judy Ball December 8, 2021 at 4:18 PM rains. Ah Winter Rain. Great imagery. Love it. God Bless, JB Darlene De Beaulieu December 9, 2021 at 10:44 AM Hello Judy, Thank you Judy. Winter rain is not good when it turns to ice. Blessings my friend.

Victor Buhagiar December 8, 2021 at 1:01 PM Beautiful wintry poem. But stay warm due to flu. ~~ Darlene De Beaulieu December 9, 2021 at 10:46 AM Hello Victor, Thank you Victor, Yes I will. You do the same. Enjoy your day my friend.

Heidi Sands December 8, 2021 at 11:37 AM That is the type of ground to be very careful on. I learned that falling once on snow covered ice. Stay warm , my friend :) Darlene De Beaulieu December 9, 2021 at 10:47 AM Hello Heidi, yes it is the type of ground to be carful with. Hugs.