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The Puddles Freezes

On the window pane Are raindrops starting Down the window panel It is a downpour of rain On the pavement are puddles They begin small then Slowly the puddles grow bigger The air changes quickly The puddles freezes Snow begins to fall Covering the ground Quickly with the snow

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Tony Hargreaves

Date: 1/13/2022 12:48:00 PM

Darlene. Enjoyed this one. Thanks. I watch the window pane. / For we get lots of rain. / It drives some insane. /But we should not complain. Tony

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/13/2022 3:43:00 PM

Hello Tony Hargreaves, yes I agree. I watch the raindrops on the window pane. i also watch the ice melting on the wondwo pane. A lot of different shapes I see. Enjoy your evening my friend.

njv Tomcatx

Date: 12/17/2021 5:56:00 AM

Lovely poem with very good imagery.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/17/2021 12:05:00 PM

Hello Nick V. thank you Nick, Merry Christmas all the best for the New Year. Enjoy your day my friend.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 12/16/2021 4:04:00 AM

Darlene,We used to love frozen water as children, making wonderful slides in the school yard...Delice

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/16/2021 6:16:00 AM

Hello Delice, oh! I can just picture this scene. It sounds like you had fun. Hugs.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/14/2021 7:16:00 PM

The puddles freeze -- Pretty, but bad for my knees. ~ Arthritic Allosaur

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/15/2021 10:28:00 AM

Hello Gershon, a puddle freezes--would be slippery ,I would have to be very careful walking and try to avoid the puddles. I have arthritis in 5 places and i am lucky they do not hurt at the same time. Enjoy your day my friend.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/13/2021 12:33:00 PM

"the air changes quickly" - this is totally what happens in the midwest too. Nicely put.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/14/2021 11:22:00 AM

Hello Caren, It happens her to. Thank you. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/13/2021 9:27:00 AM

Looks like old man winter is here for a few months. Come on spring. Stay warm. Have a blessed day...................

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/13/2021 11:40:00 AM

Hello Paula, old man winter is coming. Right now I am enjoying the bright green grass. The snow melted away. Hugs. Darlene

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/13/2021 3:42:00 AM

from rain to snow then snow to rain then sunshine and heat again dear Darlene. What a beautiful cycle God has created for us. Thank you for sharing your words today, keep well, stay inspired, with God help I know you will :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/13/2021 6:42:00 AM

Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, yes from rain to snow to rain again. Yes it is a beautiful cycle created by God. I will and you dothe same. Blessings .

Paul Callus

Date: 12/12/2021 9:32:00 AM

Your wintry imagery is so vivid that I can feel the cold, Darlene. Luckily my winters are not as cold as yours. ~ Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/12/2021 3:35:00 PM

Hello Paul, You are very lucky to have warmer winters. Right now we have our grass back and looking greener than it does in summer. But i know the snow will come. Frgards Darlene

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/11/2021 5:47:00 AM

Beautiful images of our wondrous nature Darlene!! Lovely thoughts are evoked! Happy Saturday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/11/2021 11:08:00 AM

Hello Mike, thank you Mike for this wonderful comment. Happy Saturday. xxxx-oooo.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/10/2021 12:13:00 PM

Hi, Darlene ... what a wonderful picture you made :) - We've had a cold winter for a few weeks now - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/11/2021 11:10:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile, Oh - that is where the snow went. We had snow it meoted then snowed then melted. Now the grass is greener than it is in summer. Hugs.

Thomas Wells

Date: 12/9/2021 11:31:00 PM

It is mysterious and magical how water freezes. This poem brings winter to life! Well done, Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/10/2021 11:08:00 AM

Hello Thomas Wells, yes it is mysterious and magical how the water freezes. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your weekend my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/9/2021 10:16:00 PM

This is a real beauty of a poem, where the weather changes right before your eyes, Darlene. Happy holidays, Evelyn

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/10/2021 11:09:00 AM

Hello Evelyn, Thank you Evelyn. Happy Holidays to you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/8/2021 6:22:00 PM

The days are getting colder and the rain turning into ice. Enjoyed reading. Have a wonderful Christmas. Hugs Eve

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/9/2021 10:43:00 AM

Hello Eve, yes the days are getting colder and the puddles are turning to ice. I do not walk well on ice. I fear to break something. Thank you. You also have a wonderful Christmas. Hugs.