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The Proud Peacock

I am the Peacock,
the beautiful bride
of the bird kingdom.
I am in no doubt
fairer than the cock,
for I dwarf its pride
with feathers that stand-out.
I am the Peacock
who desires serfdom
from the bird kingdom,
for I long to usurp
the title of king
from the strong Eagle
who soars atop
with its air-borne wings.
Though fit as fiddle
with an awesome strength,
gliding the sky's length
at a blistering pace,
yet dreaded for a face
that is void of grace.
I am the Peacock;
the elegantly clad.
Humans would be mad
to contend with me,
for shame you would see
if unclad they be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/15/2017 6:07:00 PM
The peacock is my very favourite bird - so beautiful, so proud and confident! Love the metaphor and imagery! Well done! Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 4/11/2017 3:36:00 PM
Good one Joseph; loved the contrasts. I have a question about Line 2 (Should not the bride rather read: "Bridegroom"?) shalom/Easter blessings, if u receive it.AD
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Joseph C Ogbonna
Date: 4/17/2017 3:07:00 AM
Thanks Anil. Beauty is feminine, and the Peacock happens to be perhaps the fairest of birds. That is the reason why I consider the word 'bride' to be most suitable. Thanks, and sorry for the belated reply.

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