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The Proposal

The sun was shining brightly As we drove around his land And showing me his kingdom First, before he asked my hand We stopped for cake and coffee It was almost half past two And that tall man was shaking When he told me I love you He gently bent to kiss me His lips began shaking fast I thought this was the moment That he would ask me at last We climbed inside his Audi Driving slowly to his farm I thought this was the moment When he gently touched my arm But no, he was just helping Me kindly into the house We both walk in together Was he playing cat and mouse At six o’clock he brought me Out to watch him milk the cows And sitting on the stone fence I watched as he fed the sows I never thought he’d ask me As I sat perched on my thrown Then came, will you marry me And his farm became my home I know that’s not romantic In this land of poetry But standing in the manure Was better than bended knee Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 09.23.2014 Contest: Will you Marry Me Judy Konos 1st

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Date: 9/28/2014 6:56:00 AM
- Brenda, congrats with your winning poem - A wonderful 1st place !!! - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/29/2014 11:57:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 9/28/2014 5:33:00 AM
Cute and lovely proposal Brenda, congrats on the win
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/29/2014 11:57:00 AM
Thanks so much Dr. Mehta
Date: 9/27/2014 11:06:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/29/2014 11:56:00 AM
Thank you for my first spot Judy.
Date: 9/27/2014 10:46:00 AM
Perfect write Brenda! This waiting to hear what u anticipate is tough my dear! Congrats on huge win!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/29/2014 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma
Date: 9/27/2014 9:52:00 AM
Excellent write Congratulations on your numer 1 win.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/29/2014 11:55:00 AM
Thanks Maurice.
Date: 9/27/2014 8:17:00 AM
many congrats on your top spot:-) am sitting right next to you on the step:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/29/2014 11:54:00 AM
Thanks Jan. XOXO
Date: 9/25/2014 10:50:00 AM
I love it....it brought a smile to my morning and makes for a great conversation starter....hugs Tim
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/25/2014 1:50:00 PM
Bahahaha, you just made my day Tim.
Date: 9/24/2014 2:18:00 AM
cute proposal Brenda I adore the final stanza;-) Hugs Jan xxx good luck in the contest. xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/24/2014 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Jan. I had fun writing this. Especially the last stanza.
Date: 9/23/2014 11:25:00 PM
This is just beautiful - adorable. I love it. Best of luck to you. God bless you and happy writing. Love and prayers, Gina
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/23/2014 11:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Regina

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