Ralph Taylor Poet Tail-rhyme

The Proposal

He showed the ring, they were alone.
He spoke these words, in a soft, sweet tone!
"Darling, be my bride"!

She let out, a romantic moan!
She received, the Diamond stone!
"Yes dear", she replied!

4/21/12
Contest:  Tail Rhyme Time

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 17, 2012 at 2:06 PM A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Ralph. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick May 17, 2012 at 12:55 PM Congrats on your win.....Sara

Nette Onclaud May 15, 2012 at 5:18 AM a diamond of a rhyme, ralph.. congrats on your win!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich May 14, 2012 at 9:09 PM well, I still think this is a darn good one. So cute! Congrats on the win, Ralph.

Barbara Gorelick May 14, 2012 at 7:43 PM Cubic Zerconium? lol..Well done Ralph and congrats. BG

Joseph May May 14, 2012 at 7:21 PM diamonds are a girl's best friend...congrats on your win Ralph..

Joseph May May 14, 2012 at 7:21 PM diamonds are a girl's best friend...congrats on your win Ralph..

Debra Squyres May 14, 2012 at 3:53 PM ohhhhh....so romantic !! Love it !! Congrats on your winning placement in the contest !!

Kash Poet May 14, 2012 at 11:54 AM Very romantic!! Congrats Ralph on your win!

Deborah Burch May 14, 2012 at 11:36 AM Congratulations on your win Ralph!! big hugs, love ya deb

David Williams May 14, 2012 at 11:32 AM RALPH congrats on your win..David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 14, 2012 at 10:56 AM Congrats on your win Ralph xx

Sara Kendrick April 22, 2012 at 6:42 PM Cute one..Enjoyed reading this one today..The diamond sealed the sweet deal..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Wilma Neels April 22, 2012 at 12:42 PM Ralph, a great entry.. You make it look soooo easy ;) all the best for the contest luv & hugs Wilma

Harry Horsman April 22, 2012 at 3:59 AM good luck with this Ralph, wonderful. harry

Andrea Dietrich April 21, 2012 at 9:16 PM oh, wow,this is one of the best ones I've seen. I love it, Ralph.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2012 at 6:32 PM Diamonds are the women`s best friend....Of cource she said YES!!! - lol..... - well done. - oxox Anne-Lise

Diana-Marie Bombardieri April 21, 2012 at 5:42 PM A lovely write for the contest, Ralph. Good luck!

Joann Grisetti April 21, 2012 at 5:32 PM Great poem for the contest. makes me think back forty years.