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Drops on knee Marry me Select day First of May Choose right dress Oh what stress! Mother bakes Wedding cakes Guest’s arrive At church drive My bridesmaid Is delayed Bridal car Wait with pa Drive past church Tummies lurch Must take stock Go round block Let out cheer Bridesmaid here Blushing bride Dad feels pride Walk down aisle Beaming smile Get wed now Repeat vow Hymns to sing Exchange ring Wedded bliss Sealed with kiss Buffet time Food’s sublime Best man speaks … Groom’s flushed cheeks! Toasts the bride At groom’s side Our first dance Such romance Wedding night… Pure delight! Threes, Please Poetry Contest Sponsored by Beth Evans 09/10/20

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Date: 9/19/2020 7:10:00 PM
Nice picture Jan. Congratulations on your placement! Linda
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/20/2020 8:06:00 AM
thanks Linda:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/19/2020 6:48:00 PM
Great entry, Jan, congratulations.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/20/2020 8:05:00 AM
thanks Beth it was a super challenge:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/14/2020 4:37:00 PM
You are so gifted at this, Jan! What a splendid journey you take us through, from proposal to wedding night. Love it, I sense a winner! Hugs ~ John
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/20/2020 8:05:00 AM
I love the fun footle form and this was quite similar, i find once i start i can't stop:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/13/2020 12:46:00 PM
Great job Jan!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 9/13/2020 4:41:00 PM
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/13/2020 12:48:00 PM
thanks Mark hope you are having fun with your new toy lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/12/2020 12:15:00 PM
Oh, you did a fabulous job with this entry, Jan. I love following the wedding day story in your poem. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/12/2020 12:32:00 PM
thanks Carolyn i love the form its so similar to footles:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/11/2020 11:59:00 AM
Nice work, Jan! Aloha! Rico
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/11/2020 4:55:00 PM
cheers my friend:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/11/2020 10:44:00 AM
This is the most cutest romantic bridal poem I have ever read. You describe the brides feelings to a T plus the father and the groom. Excellent poem good luck in the contest Jan. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/11/2020 2:50:00 PM
thanks Jennifer i did write about 50 lines then had to trim it down for the contest.... once you start its hard to stop!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/11/2020 5:15:00 AM
- Pure delight, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/11/2020 2:49:00 PM
thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/11/2020 1:11:00 AM
A pleasing write. Everyone loves weddings. ~~
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/11/2020 1:17:00 AM
Its SO good to see you back Victor, hope you will re post your back catalogue and some new poems too:-) welcome back:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2020 3:54:00 PM
a delightful poem.Hello Jan,I like this poem. A lovely rhyme, a delightful poem. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/11/2020 12:30:00 PM
Hello Jan, you are welcome. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs Darlene
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/11/2020 1:16:00 AM
thanks Darlene:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/10/2020 2:07:00 PM
Looks like we both got married in our Threes, Please writes. Good rhyming, Jan.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/10/2020 2:18:00 PM
thanks Jenna, I started the poem last night and finished it today then realised I had over run on the line limit, removing stanzas was more difficult than writing them!:-) hugs jan xx