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The Promise

I knew 'twas you the first time I saw you; Your eyes left a stern promise~ that you'll come back to me. 5 September 2021 Kimo Form Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 1st place A Brian Strand 1091 Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/6/2022 3:17:00 AM
I see that ou are always a winner in contests. Congratulations friend .Kimo.... I see very many new forms of poems here. Eyes communicate more than words.... sometimes.
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Date: 9/9/2021 1:57:00 PM
Wonderful expression of a growing romance found in a meaningful glance and a promise to return. Congratulations on your win JCB! Blessings!
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Date: 9/8/2021 9:01:00 PM
JCB, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your beautiful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/7/2021 4:25:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 9/7/2021 3:06:00 AM
Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Date: 9/6/2021 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your write, "The Promise" is sweet/romantic. A few words tells the story. Have a blessed day............
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Date: 9/6/2021 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations JCB!
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Date: 9/6/2021 7:59:00 AM
Very nice message! Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 9/5/2021 3:42:00 PM
Back again to say congrats. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 9/5/2021 3:27:00 PM
such a sweet poem JCB, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/5/2021 10:44:00 AM
Such a sweet, promising, romantic poem. Beautiful! Congratulations.
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Date: 9/5/2021 4:59:00 AM
Beautiful, Kimo Poem, Dear Friend. romantic, and hopeful! Love ~ Mala
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