JC Brul Poet Kimo

The Promise

I knew 'twas you the first time I saw you;
Your eyes left a stern promise~
that you'll come back to me.




5 September 2021

Kimo Form Old or New Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
1st place

A Brian Strand 1091 Poetry Contest

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Valsa George February 6, 2022 at 3:17 AM I see that ou are always a winner in contests. Congratulations friend .Kimo.... I see very many new forms of poems here. Eyes communicate more than words.... sometimes.

Sam Kauffman September 9, 2021 at 1:57 PM Wonderful expression of a growing romance found in a meaningful glance and a promise to return. Congratulations on your win JCB! Blessings!

Constance La France September 8, 2021 at 9:01 PM JCB, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your beautiful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Beata Agustin September 7, 2021 at 4:25 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Sara Kendrick September 7, 2021 at 3:06 AM Congrats on this winner. Sara

Paula Goldsmith September 6, 2021 at 11:47 AM Congratulations on your win. Your write, "The Promise" is sweet/romantic. A few words tells the story. Have a blessed day............

Kim Rodrigues September 6, 2021 at 9:51 AM Congratulations JCB!

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2021 at 7:59 AM Very nice message! Congrats in the contest.

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 5, 2021 at 3:42 PM Back again to say congrats. Love ~ Mala

Jan Allison September 5, 2021 at 3:27 PM such a sweet poem JCB, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Marilene Evans September 5, 2021 at 10:44 AM Such a sweet, promising, romantic poem. Beautiful! Congratulations.

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 5, 2021 at 4:59 AM Beautiful, Kimo Poem, Dear Friend. romantic, and hopeful! Love ~ Mala