The Promise!

If all we see....
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Is vapors of fading empties
Intangible sights, of which the soul
Can never truly hold?....
Bricks of mortar bound buildings
And endless faces, passing by within the crowds
As quickly as the light from our days
They seem to all fade away
Left standing in the solitude
Of our own searching eyes....
Into the reflections of ones soul
The purpose and the meaning, for it all?
As we gaze into the sunset
That shall someday surely arrive....
What marks have we made?
What treasures have we found?
Is it enough within the end
As we face our final breathes
And to our lives, we take our final bow?
Knowing, that the best we could have hoped for
Was always shrouded, by the prevailing clouds
Of grey, and darkened skies
That have always surrounded our lives....
And then we sigh
As we try to touch, the untouchable light
Amid a life that has passed so quickly
Within the dust, which had paved its path
Is this all that there is?
These shimmering moments, of joy and hope
Awakening from a dream; like a flower
That withers beneath the scorching sun
All that we knew; and all that we loved....
For without hope, there is no tomorrow
So what was this life, truly all about?
Could all of its gold and pleasures
Could they have been worth it in the end?
If not, then why chase and pursue
These unquenchably fading ghosts
If, within the morning of our lives
We shall suddenly awaken 
Unto our forever eternal graves....
No, there must be more
Than what we hold touch or see
Less truly, we be most miserable
Within the lights dying
The death of our soul~
Although, I have seen Heaven....
And I have embraced, 'The Morning Star!'
Shall I not wish for all
This eternity that I have beheld?
That they may see beyond this moment
As bittersweet, at its best
That it truly is....
And to dream of holding ones loved ones
Within their arms, always, and forevermore
Bricks of mortar bound buildings, no
But an eternity within paradise....
Where their love, and all love, shall never end!
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                  The Promise!
                    {John 14}
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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January 22, 2009 at 5:18 PM
John this is another beautifully written piece. Why are we hear to what purpose. I believe God has a reason for us all. Maybe as writers we will leave our mark while the world as we know it still exisits. Thought provoking write, John. Also thank you for all your kind and thoughtful comments. You always make me smile! (1 Corinthians 2:6-16) God bless you always! Love, Robin
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October 30, 2008 at 8:11 AM
lovely. again you write such beauty in the word. thank you for your wonderful praise of my work. I might have a gentle kind soul but in the looks department I am sorely lacking. thank you kind sir for your lovely praise.
Christian Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 9:11 AM
thank you love leanne
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October 29, 2008 at 8:39 AM
The promise of salvation through the love of God is a source of enduring strength and insiration...as one can see by reading your words. It's been a long time John, I hope you're well. Now that my computer is repaired and running again I have alot to catch up on and reaquaint myself with. Peace my friend. My best, Charlie
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October 29, 2008 at 3:27 AM
sorry it came the same emssage up twice, I am not sure what happened, But God keeps eevry promise he says. Amen thanks for a wonderful piece to read. Love to you from all.
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October 29, 2008 at 3:25 AM
Yes and the promise of eternal life, Amen, God bless you John. from diane
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October 29, 2008 at 3:23 AM
Amen to this piece John, God never breaks a single promise, and his love will endure forever, all our loved ones are waiting for us in heaven, the all fre from this world and satans lies, my leanne makes us laugh because she always says satan you staying under my feet and if you try get up ill jump on your head, she is so cute, she knows of God's promises and has carved them in her heart, she knows God loves her and she loves him,
Christian Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 3:23 AM
Amen to this piece John, God never breaks a single promise, and his love will endure forever, all our loved ones are waiting for us in heaven, the all fre from this world and satans lies, my leanne makes us laugh because she always says satan you staying under my feet and if you try get up ill jump on your head, she is so cute, she knows of God's promises and has carved them in her heart, she knows God loves her and she loves him,
Torres Avatar
October 28, 2008 at 5:20 PM
John the heartfelt enduring love of being their for your love ones and leading them to salvation never giving up is a great testimony. Incredible thoughts put together by selective perfection. God bless you John Rhinem.
White Avatar
October 28, 2008 at 4:46 PM
no john nothing is more important than giving of ourselves over to the Lord, but whatever we do in this life do it to the best of our ability and all past mistakes will have been forgiven if we are truly repentant, I love your line gazing into the sunset and shrouded by prevailing clouds, what a riveting write, as always I enjoy reading you, and thanks always for your wonderful comments, take care and I hope that all is well with you, love always Deneen
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