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The Prodigal Son

Why do you choose to stoop this low? On the streets of savages and thieves you roam. What has affected your sense of reasoning? When in your father’s house there’s a huge foam? Your uncertain mobility with so much savings; hitting rock-bottom which I wouldn’t have guessed, you waited to go through pains, eating with pigs; sawed by poverty before you knew you’re blessed. Your realization is complete, please embrace good sense come back home and let your pride pretend. You’re still important no matter how far you’ve deviated because your welcome celebration, even the king will attend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/7/2016 8:32:00 AM
good one Funom, such good imagery and rhyme, well penned!
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/20/2016 1:09:00 PM
thank you so much Gordon McConnell
Date: 7/5/2015 4:18:00 PM
However much we stray, the father is always ready to forgive and welcome us back with open arms! Lovely poem, Funom. // paul
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Date: 2/1/2016 7:21:00 AM
Thank you very much Callus
Date: 6/26/2015 12:36:00 PM
Very like the Biblical story..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 2/1/2016 7:21:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara

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