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The Problem

Look at the world that surrounds us drink it all in like fine wine Look at the people around us pissing and moaning like swine Look at the few who adore me until you find a pattern within Look at the way that they bore me how can i hate my own friends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/9/2009 4:26:00 AM
Different idea put to pen. Holds some truths. I especially like the first stanza. Keep writing. Sara
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