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On a patch pink Called a brown skink Near my bed room Made a rose bloom It is such things There and then brings Sparks from our soul Waves in our bowl In the pond’s froth There was a moth I caught it live Both got in strife Put it on a Stack of gray hay Made sure it lies Near the skink’s eyes The skink looked pleased It rushed in speed But stopped short of Grab on moths love It once looked right The eyes shone bright Turned its head left In a move deft My, oh, my, a Skink pink and gray On a tree stem Now two of them Both rushed and met A lot of sweat Colts from old Troy Huge flood of joy __________________ February 3, 2018 128 Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by : Silent One

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Date: 2/15/2018 10:38:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Probir - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/6/2018 11:40:00 PM
Wow.... This is so nice... Great flow and a wonderful story... Congratulations on your win...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/7/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/5/2018 6:27:00 PM
What an interesting subject, Probir. Congrats on your win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/7/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes ...
Date: 2/5/2018 10:50:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/5/2018 11:40:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 2/5/2018 3:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Probir. This is such a lively, lovely write.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/5/2018 11:41:00 AM
Thank you, Bernard ...
Date: 2/5/2018 12:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/5/2018 11:43:00 AM
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Date: 2/4/2018 5:12:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/5/2018 11:42:00 AM
Thank you, Line ...
Date: 2/4/2018 3:26:00 PM
Great take on the contest Probir.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/5/2018 11:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Silent, for your nice appreciation of poetry ...
Date: 2/3/2018 5:22:00 PM
Enjoyed reading, Probir, had to look up what a skink was . Ooh , :( ugly bugger .. Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/5/2018 11:47:00 AM
Well, may be so ... But the motif of the poem lies elsewhere, which you understand very well ... Thank you ...
Date: 2/3/2018 7:34:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem Probir. You did well, telling this story with rhymes that flow well..best for a win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/5/2018 11:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay ...

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