The Priority

On a patch pink
Called a brown skink
Near my bed room
Made a rose bloom

It is such things
There and then brings
Sparks from our soul
Waves in our bowl

In the pond’s froth
There was a moth
I caught it live
Both got in strife

Put it on a
Stack of gray hay
Made sure it lies
Near the skink’s eyes

The skink looked pleased
It rushed in speed
But stopped short of
Grab on moths love

It once looked right
The eyes shone bright
Turned its head left
In a move deft

My, oh, my, a
Skink pink and gray  
On a tree stem
Now two of them

Both rushed and met
A lot of sweat
Colts from old Troy
Huge flood of joy
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February 3, 2018

128 Words - Poetry Contest
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Barden Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 10:38 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Probir - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
Kannan Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 11:40 PM
Wow.... This is so nice... Great flow and a wonderful story... Congratulations on your win...
Gupta Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Thank you ...
Krampe Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 6:27 PM
What an interesting subject, Probir. Congrats on your win.
Gupta Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Thank you, Agnes ...
Roper Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Back with congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 11:40 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Chan Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 3:06 AM
Congratulations, Probir. This is such a lively, lovely write.
Gupta Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Thank you, Bernard ...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 12:43 AM
Congratulations on your great win.
Gupta Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 11:43 AM
Thank you ...
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Probir.
Gupta Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Thank you, Line ...
One Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Great take on the contest Probir.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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February 5, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Thank you so much, Silent, for your nice appreciation of poetry ...
Roper Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 5:22 PM
Enjoyed reading, Probir, had to look up what a skink was . Ooh , :( ugly bugger .. Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 11:47 AM
Well, may be so ... But the motif of the poem lies elsewhere, which you understand very well ... Thank you ...
Pandit Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem Probir. You did well, telling this story with rhymes that flow well..best for a win.
Gupta Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 11:48 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay ...
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