Get Your Premium Membership

The Primordial World of Love

White doves flutter and longing words whisper silence waxes haunting as Angels sing a lone filtered light turns a soft glister casts fleeting shadows from a white dove's wing this arrow of light has pierced the dusk-gray to light the face where my heart will wander where my eyes are welcome and I will stay captured by my love's smoldering ardor as stars gleam and the twilight surrenders wrapped by the moonlight, love we'll discover at this time for us, we'll find love's treasures a wondrous wonder so warm and tender this primordial world of breathless sighs this passion's realm found in my lover's eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/29/2024 10:49:00 AM
The sonnet form is such an interesting style of poetry. To me, it personifies life. It contains a beginning, then progresses into a cycle of events that concludes in a finality. Also, the tempo can flow from calm to intense - Serenity fills this sonnet, Frederic. Well done.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/24/2024 9:56:00 AM
- Sigh, so warm, tender, romantic and beautiful Frederic :) - hugs
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs