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The Prime

(02/09/2011) I was the one to be tagged Beseeching to beg not to be bagged Now, do taste your own fruit of your crime No need to sniff the truth, no time! I’ve been slapped and used to be a wreck You kneel before me, begging and weeping Cos you can smell stink from inside that crack Life’s like a wheel, huh? It’s being proven thing Crawling in devastating and raging in grabbing It’s time for you to feel the torment of climbing In the present, you’re only was-a-star If revenge is as sweet as spring time Your tears are the nectar Drained by me, who’s at the moment, the prime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/4/2011 5:22:00 PM
Wow, a lot of emotion in this with a great resolution aat the end.
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Date: 10/15/2011 3:06:00 PM
Victory is sweet! Good for you.
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Date: 9/12/2011 7:54:00 PM
Dindra....enjoyed your work today! nectar of tossed love.
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Date: 9/9/2011 6:50:00 PM
Your Poetry is so real and like watching a movie you can't tae your eyes off of... a true talent and proud to be your friend and at times your poetic partner... love and hugs Michael
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Date: 9/8/2011 3:37:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dinda. Love, Carol
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