The Price Paid

What have I done? What has it cost? What have I won? 
I know what I’ve lost.
I’ve come back empty in each hand. I’m confused. I don’t understand. 
my knees start to buckle. I’m losing my strength. Why am I feeling so weak? 
I should call out for help but it seems I forgot how to speak. I’m so heavy, getting crushed by the weight, it’s killing me. Am I being  introduced to my fate. I start to fight but I fear it’s too late. everything is pulling and dragging me down. I’ve been gasping for air. It’s too much maybe I should let myself drown. I start to sink. And for a moment I don’t even think. I’ve reached the bottom and now I’m on the brink, maybe of insanity or maybe some sense my eyes shatter open and my body’s grown tense . I make a break for the light that’s luring me up to the top .
I make a vow to myself to keep going , won’t let myself stop.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 12/23/2022 5:06:00 PM
Amen, we all need to get to this point to see our own path is not working to give one peace , joy and love , things in this world will never fill that void,. It's fighting against God that we don't see that is causing distress and misery among us,. Come and seek Jesus for rest , peace , comfort, guidance of a new path, love and joy
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