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The Price of Last Night

Waking to sight of day
The ironic disorientation
bedroom ceiling moviescreen 
fades out this dreams last scene
left looking dumbfounded at tiles

Sunrays shine splintered through bent blinds
  casting illuminous entities into otherwise
darker turf
  Blanket tangles limbs and ambition tight
traversing body and shielding one eye
 guarding it from the illuminites
I draw higher to seek shelter for both 

Life's rumble manifests in murmurs 
  builds gradual, head clears
Horns, tires, voices-reality appears
The window sings soundtrack for urban noise
the horn annoys-the voices noise-the bird song annoys
noise annoys noise and pisses me off!!!
  
  Mind flips modes from hazy wander lust
To more acute senses... tune and adjust
The morning is a step ahead
 we will assimilate soon-just before noon
Rise ...casting off covers takes convincing
face the day begrudging and wincing
    
  See...this Evening's eve was very good to me
I reveled in debauchery-I tore the town down, you see?
I went to the school of bar-red knocks--and rocked
bellied up brasher shot for shot
As the sour mash showed effects
I drunk dialed my entire roladex
Jameson ,my Irish ego, whispered dares to me
  I performed them to shocked stares, you See?!
 We gloated stumbling in revelry

This is the price for the tab last night....
The noise pounds into my mind
  Street noise, chirp annoys, pound in my head noise
noise annoys noise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/21/2009 12:41:00 PM
Oh my goodness this is excellent!! As someone who's been in that situation I can safely say you describe it most eloquently and with a great deal of accuracy :) The imagery is brilliant, and it flows really nicely. You have a superb turn of phrase. I love it :D
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Date: 1/21/2009 4:30:00 AM
Wondrful imagery that makes this piece jumps off the page. I am so there seeing it all in this write..great flow, excellent write.
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Date: 1/21/2009 1:03:00 AM
Hmmmm/ Well Steve, can't say I've never been there but definitely not like that. :) Great imagery throughout this entire piece. I enjoyed this read this morning. Lucinda
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