The Pressed Rose

(a collaboration with Dilly Dally, great fun, thank you)

Lost as the night wraps its ebony shades
round red lips like the petals on roses unfurled;
in the mist, the soft crimson of beckoning smiles
leave me hopeless to shun a temptation like this.

Watching eyes in the dark now hang in the air,
mouths smothered in silence, are untouched and alone
~ through the fog, mute impressions choke a voice that was mine
before sliding to sleep in a vulnerable dream...

In the air, like the scent, of a fresh blooming rose
drifts the musk, like a bee to the pollen I'm drawn,
so...in willing surrender, I contentedly fall,
though beware of the thorns and the danger they pose.

Wide awake in my dream
the night lingers ~ trapped in place,
'til I once again fall and surrender my will
~ restless dreams, tangled thoughts,
   stems stinging with fears.

What sweet peril we chase
through the gardens of dreams,
drowning in tears for what might have been
left forgotten and pressed in the pages of time...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 4:39 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Poet Destroyer's contest. Way to go. Sara K
A   Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 3:30 PM
Hi, Craig, long time no see. Hope you have been well all these years. Congratulations on your placement, I enjoyed the deep imagery, many poets did not follow the rules, every line is great, enjoyed it. Always PD ~LINDA~
Manassian Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 10:24 PM
Full of mysterious longing. Eyes hang in the air... imagery that adds a sense of disquietude. I liked the ending. Collaborations are fun. You two seemed to enjoy this. Thanks for the visit to my page.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 9:48 AM
A beautiful collaboration Craig and Dilly Dally, ~ “restless dreams, tangled thoughts… left forgotten and pressed in the pages of time” Wonderful, well done both. Beryl
Cornish Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 11:27 AM
Thanks Beryl!
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