The Present - God's Gift To Man

Though people may long for a present from God,
How many embrace the new day?
Instead of unwrapping what lies at their feet,
Dark memories paint a cliché
Of dawn’s possibilities! Isn’t it odd
Man's mood can make grown men effete?

Though day’s never wrapped up in ribbons and bows
The sunshine invites us to play,
Makes light of the fears that arise in the dark
And cripples their fearsome display,
Revealing the beauty that colors disclose,
The cry of the cloaked meadowlark.

Man’s best chance to shine always comes with the dawn,
As caution is thrown to the wind.
And his expectations? No need of repair,
The future’s not his to defend!
He rises to stand on the legs of a fawn,
God’s present he leaves in His care!

Long Tooth
March 31, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/8/2023 7:07:00 PM
I like your poems!
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Date: 1/9/2023 4:24:00 PM
Thanks for your open-ended validation Clifford! I'll look forward to future comments!
Date: 3/28/2020 10:13:00 PM
A new day a new beginning, a life of choice, I hope with the guidance of the Lord.
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Date: 4/3/2016 1:01:00 AM
THE PRESENT! GOD'S GIFT TO MAN! is beautifully written. The message it conveys is very clear and illuminating. That the present is alluring. The past is a stale cheque while the future is a post dated cheque. The present the now holds the keys to our bliss. It behoves us as humans to pray so that God can open our eyes so that we can see what rightfully belongs to us for the moment.
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Date: 4/1/2016 7:42:00 PM
Excellent poem Roof Missing. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 4/1/2016 5:10:00 AM
Amazing write, Roof, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/1/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thanks for the friendly and generous greeting Linda. I will indeed check out your poems and would always appreciate any comment you feel moved to leave me. One can never have too many friends. :-)
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