The Precipice of the Unknown

Standing at the precipice,
hanging by the skin of my teeth
with eyes brimming with tears,
I looked down into the murky abyss…

How often have I tried to unravel
what lies beyond the realm of mind?
Ethereal and graceful, 
One of a kind
An all-knowing, all-encompassing 
that only my heart knows better    
where my soul finally belong.

O Death, calm my restless spirit
Deliver me from this despair, 
Tell me, how long must I suffer
this feeling of anguish in my mind
before my soul to its abode depart? 
I want to step my feet 
where there’s no further to go.

A silent bolt of lightning 
thunderously strikes my heart,
A flash of darkness sparkles
like an echo reverberating in
a brimming void wrapping me in
a swathe of emptiness this world cannot fill.

Consumed by fear driven by paranoia,
I raised my arms to embrace
this foreboding darkness and
plunge forward whispering,

Life, I bid you adieu.


~02/06/22
~Contest: Pick-A-Title Vol.28 
~Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 2/13/2022 7:40:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this dark, powerful write, Abdul:-) I loved your poem. Well-done!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/5/2022 8:03:00 AM
Thanks much.
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