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The Pragmatist

She's no loner, but she doesn't have an owner Here's the story of how she became, From a free cheerful butterfly to monotonous, tame. Dancing eyes and the curve of lips rose, Merry-merry laughter and a sharp straight nose. A mane of sunlight caught at dusk, Of honey, amber and of rust. Peaches of cream n' milk below deep pools, A gaze of such intent that heats and cools. A bundle of gentleness and fiery energy,With innocence, inquisition and insatiety. Brave and strong, intriguing each trait, Every soul longed to meet The Passionate The Passionate was she known by then, Until she met a Loner. The Loner had a gift, an element very rare, Where other mares pranced, just to look and stare. The Passionate caught his eye, a pearly glistening blue, He held his breath for long,but still did not pursue. He waited and watched with patience galore To test and trap, The passionate into the lure. Step by step he progressed,with selection and choice The moisture of his words quenched the thirst of her own voice She thought she was in love when he satisfied his desire, And perished her innocent beauty to smithereens dire. Long after she realized that the line on his face was a smirk, not a smile. She cried in pain and agony when she came to know she was used all this while. It took her years to capture a life into her living, She cut out her heart and threads of emotion and giving. The life in her beauty had diminished by afar, For her innocence and love were bruised with everlasting scars. She altered her way from The Passionate,The Pragmatist she became forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/5/2016 9:44:00 PM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN, V G, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 3/17/2016 5:39:00 AM
"From a free cheerful butterfly to monotonous, tame." wow..this is moving..This is simply brilliant!! A most touching and riveting tale, with great word use and creativity. "Peaches of cream n' milk below deep pools, A gaze of such intent that heats and cools." That's a cool moment in the poem. I also really like, "She thought she was in love when he satisfied his desire, And perished her innocent beauty to smithereens dire."..dazzling work! Hope to read more from you soon! Always, Laura
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Date: 3/16/2016 6:56:00 AM
Vinaya, thanks for the reply.... Have a blessed day ...Linda
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Date: 3/15/2016 5:00:00 PM
Hi Vinaya, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Vinaya Godbole
Date: 3/16/2016 6:46:00 AM
Thanks SKAT for the warm welcome!
Date: 3/15/2016 10:44:00 AM
Vinaya, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Vinaya Godbole
Date: 3/16/2016 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Linda for the warm welcome! :)

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