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The Powerful Period

I’m always the last. Yet I wield immense power. Use me, abuse me. So prattle on, I’ll let you corral your thoughts, let you breathe. For Deb's Period contest... 9/10/15

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/11/2015 1:59:00 PM

The Periods have it..Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara

Skat A

Date: 10/9/2015 12:14:00 AM

well done

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/7/2015 7:48:00 PM

Very Zen! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 10/9/2015 10:10:00 AM

Thanks Deb..Good to hear from you. BG

Nathan Bach

Date: 10/6/2015 11:36:00 PM

Yes that's just what a full stop does! Well done in the competition Nath :-)

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 10/9/2015 10:10:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by..this was such a fun contest. BG

Michael Tor

Date: 10/6/2015 9:33:00 PM

Barbara excellent win. Congratulations.

Daver Austin

Date: 9/16/2015 1:22:00 PM

This could apply to many things. I call it the writing process. "Use me, abuse me" Yes? Love, daver

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 10/9/2015 10:11:00 AM

Hi my dear Dave.. Thank you for stopping by. HOpe all is well with you and yours. BG

Joseph May

Date: 9/14/2015 8:15:00 PM

Nicely penned .. Great ending line... Best wishes.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/15/2015 2:53:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting. It seems it was not received very well..oh well. BG