The Power of Pride

As I surmise all that is me strewn and cluttered, 
My conscious lies casually shorn and shuttered, 
For here lie the spoils of stubborn iniquity, 
I shuffle and toil, floundering in frailty. 

Oh what great havoc, what conscious so lewd, 
Creates such traffic which now spoils the fruit, 
Of truly righteous deeds committed by a scurrilous man, 
Of whom I could no better know, no better understand, 

For this terribly lost and forever forlorn soul, 
Is none other than me shivering and sniveling so, 
And as helpless as I suddenly appear to be, 
I now understand the strength pride provides so easily, 

For there is purpose in pride, yet none in shame, 
As ambition carries us blind to who’s at blame, 
And just where is the woe when the devil may care, 
For we are soon found alone, our conscious left bare, 

And as I embark into this desolate place, 
My horrors so dark, my fears crimson in taste, 
Forward I race into the perilous pit, 
With none other to blame for this simple life I quit.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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George   Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 1:39 PM
Complex and profound introspective Ballad , my friend. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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December 31, 2009 at 1:11 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.
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December 29, 2009 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week My Gull. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 28, 2009 at 3:17 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
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May 12, 2009 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 3, 2009 at 11:40 PM
Michael, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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April 4, 2009 at 9:49 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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March 20, 2009 at 10:32 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week..GB , Tyesha
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March 20, 2009 at 7:55 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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March 20, 2009 at 2:09 PM
congratulations on your featured poem, one love, brother.
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March 19, 2009 at 1:33 PM
Congratulations michael on your ballad "The Power Of Pride" being featured. Vince
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March 16, 2009 at 11:03 PM
My horrors so dark, my fears crimson in taste . . . I really like the analogy here, well done, and congratulations on being featured. Peace Fathima
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March 16, 2009 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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March 16, 2009 at 4:05 PM
Wow, powerful words and a wonderful message. Congratulations on being featured this week it is well deserved, and this one goes into my favorites. Smiles from Lolita
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March 16, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Wonderful poem! Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy~
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March 15, 2009 at 1:43 PM
Yes indeed, it can go before a fall if not balanced with humility. But a little bit can also give praise to the healing that only happens with the Great Spirit ... wonderful write you've done here, Michael and you ARE to be congratulated on your writing being selected as a feature this week at the Soup!!
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