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The Power of Pride

As I surmise all that is me strewn and cluttered, My conscious lies casually shorn and shuttered, For here lie the spoils of stubborn iniquity, I shuffle and toil, floundering in frailty. Oh what great havoc, what conscious so lewd, Creates such traffic which now spoils the fruit, Of truly righteous deeds committed by a scurrilous man, Of whom I could no better know, no better understand, For this terribly lost and forever forlorn soul, Is none other than me shivering and sniveling so, And as helpless as I suddenly appear to be, I now understand the strength pride provides so easily, For there is purpose in pride, yet none in shame, As ambition carries us blind to who’s at blame, And just where is the woe when the devil may care, For we are soon found alone, our conscious left bare, And as I embark into this desolate place, My horrors so dark, my fears crimson in taste, Forward I race into the perilous pit, With none other to blame for this simple life I quit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/2/2010 1:39:00 PM
Complex and profound introspective Ballad , my friend. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 12/31/2009 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.
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Date: 12/29/2009 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week My Gull. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
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Date: 5/12/2009 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:40:00 PM
Michael, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/4/2009 9:49:00 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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Date: 3/20/2009 10:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week..GB , Tyesha
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Date: 3/20/2009 7:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 3/20/2009 2:09:00 PM
congratulations on your featured poem, one love, brother.
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Date: 3/19/2009 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations michael on your ballad "The Power Of Pride" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/16/2009 11:03:00 PM
My horrors so dark, my fears crimson in taste . . . I really like the analogy here, well done, and congratulations on being featured. Peace Fathima
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/16/2009 4:05:00 PM
Wow, powerful words and a wonderful message. Congratulations on being featured this week it is well deserved, and this one goes into my favorites. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/16/2009 9:35:00 AM
Wonderful poem! Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy~
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Date: 3/15/2009 1:43:00 PM
Yes indeed, it can go before a fall if not balanced with humility. But a little bit can also give praise to the healing that only happens with the Great Spirit ... wonderful write you've done here, Michael and you ARE to be congratulated on your writing being selected as a feature this week at the Soup!!
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