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The Pounding of My Heart

"The wind is the pounding of my heart.” --Constance La France Sound of the wind drifting through the trees Softly, I hear it; it is the pounding of my heart Keeping steady rhythm, while I am remembering The times we made pulsing love ‘neath the elms, Branches hovering over us like guardian angels Waving goldish green banners, whispering low Like the purring of your sighs after a long kiss, Your sweet breath on my neck, the elms knew, Trembling like wind in a slow-moving tremolo, Its leaves gently playing nature’s marimba slow Steadily matching my heart’s rhythmic cadence Ah, how I remember well those fond embraces.
FIRST PLACE WINNER Written August 1, 2022 Submitted to "Let Your Muse Be Inspired - R Form" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 9/6/2022 11:12:00 PM
Milt, excellent Romanticism poem beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, God Bless ~
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/7/2022 8:07:00 AM
Thanks so much, Constance. I really enjoyed writing for your contest.
Date: 9/2/2022 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on this great winner. Way to go. Sara
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/2/2022 7:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara. I appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 8/2/2022 1:30:00 PM
This fit into a category we did not expect - sensationalism "Your sweet breath on my neck, the elms knew, Trembling like wind in a slow-moving tremolo," and sensuous!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/2/2022 2:08:00 PM
Read it to Joe, Caren, and see what happens!!! (chuckling) True, I rarely write something overtly sensuous.
Date: 8/1/2022 10:30:00 PM
My, my! Milt the romantic! An outstanding write :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/2/2022 6:58:00 AM
Thank you, Unseeking Seeker. Yeah, I suppose I am when it comes right down to it.
Date: 8/1/2022 7:56:00 PM
Milt, this is the kind of poetry that sweeps a woman right off her feet! Enchanting and romantic and it is going straight into my Faves! Blessings xxoo
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/1/2022 8:21:00 PM
Well, thank you so much, Connie. I'm really glad you liked it.

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