The Potato Miner

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Tom sat fer-nent the table within a smoker's chair
A table pot of pra-tes and bacon quivers there 
The cook an apron dirty wipes the grease and clears her throat 
She cooks her husband dinner the children's and the goat's

He smokes his pipe asunder and prods and pokes its shoot
Burnt black his index finger tobacco by the root
Dear wife is it not ready for the pit I have to trot
the horse will soon be ready the timber and the shot

Dear man move to the table the butter there just melt
The pra-tes are King Edwards and tighten up your belt
Tis hot and floury flavour the bacon salty rich
Some milk would be a cooling or you will have a stitch 

Dear child come home from school now those shoes a wearing bare
You scholar and a brother of fiddle and of flare 
Before you have your pra-tes put turf upon the light
Where's dear dear sister Nancy be home before the night  

And Annie did you eat yet asked he a million times
Not yet the lady calls out but yet she never dines
The kettle purring steadily in black and iron cast  
A crook a blackened lever and tea for all at last

Hurry up now dear dear Annie the night shift I must go
Some bread some bacon sandwich the night for money sow
The sound of carts a coming and following the man
Oats and horse a chopping the collars and the ham

Goodbye now Cook and ready now depart and bid fair due 
My jacket wet and dripping, tonight and on the crew
Carts a pulling coal blast the horses strain and tear
A fire man's instruction and all are quite aware

Black sandwich square the dusty air take soda made with fruit
I hope one day I'll get away and always wear a suit 
The night is done and Annie come to greet me on the mat
Without you dear I'd not be here my life my joy my cap  


(1940s- West of Ireland) 
Ian foley- for the :Middle Of The Road Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/15/2011 3:08:00 PM
I simply love your language use here. This is good poetry, Ian. Kudos to your smooth style. :-)
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Date: 6/12/2011 2:05:00 PM
A spellbinding tale, vividly portrayed. Well done! Regards, Robert.
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