The Pond

THY wisdom oh, LORD, an infinite 
Ocean
While my understanding a miniscule
Pond,  
Waiting for a few drops of Thy celestial rain to
Fill it, with heavenly knowledge 
For 
To Thy call to respond!  


© Demetrios Trifiatis
   04 OCTOBER 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Roper Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 9:26 AM
Of all your poems I think this is my favorite. Blessings to you with wisdom , happiness, and good health. 7 and a favorite
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January 5, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Thank you, Eve! Of all my poems you have read, perhaps, this is the best but there may be more you would like as better than this one ! ha-ha!
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October 14, 2013 at 10:29 AM
Great Poem! My favorite so far
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October 14, 2013 at 10:46 AM
Jacob, you must be a very interesting young man with a profound understanding beyond your age! Thank you for visiting and for your gracious comment!
Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Here is a good one I missed. You do great epigrams. oh, guess what the captcha is? XMAS!!!
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October 13, 2013 at 8:14 AM
Thank you for the visit and kind comment plus for the explanation of...captcha! Where it comes from?
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October 6, 2013 at 4:03 PM
S nicely written, so nicely said. I too will wait for those few drops of celestial rain. Thanks for sharing..... Lucy
Roper Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 9:28 AM
She is missed
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October 6, 2013 at 6:06 PM
Thank you, Lucy, you are kind!
Mehta Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 9:47 AM
Very thoughtful and meaningful write, Demetrios
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October 6, 2013 at 5:19 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Ram!
Ellison Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 8:50 PM
You write so beautifully my dear Demetrios! I agree with Eileen! LOL Cheers!
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October 6, 2013 at 5:20 AM
Jack, I didn't know you spoke Greek! Ha-ha! Thank you!
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October 4, 2013 at 4:36 PM
This is a very wise and knowledgeable write here my friend! I truly loved reading this incredible poem this afternoon! What a fantastic piece, such an ingenious poem, Great Work!!
Trifiatis Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 5:22 AM
Thank you, Russell, for your comment and your appreciation!
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October 4, 2013 at 1:25 PM
- Poetic thought, well written Demetrios !!! - (Not able to log on P-Soup today, until now!! ... Finally) - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 4, 2013 at 3:59 PM
Thank you so much for the visit and the lovely comment dear Anne-Lise! Have a wonderful weekend!
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October 4, 2013 at 3:46 PM
Thank you so much for the visit and the lovely comment dear Anne-Lise! Have a wonderful weekend!
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October 4, 2013 at 8:33 AM
Then exo logia.....ma ti enai aufto? Apo ta kalitera sou....Wow...
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October 4, 2013 at 3:48 PM
Dear Eileen, marvelous comment but it is... Greek to everyone but me! Ha-ha! Thank you! You always generous!
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