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The Policeman In the Cafe

The policeman sits Sipping his coffee A gun on his hip Music plays softly

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Adell Foster

Date: 7/16/2009 10:17:00 AM

This is a very well written quatrain, one could truly envision the policeman sitting there haveing a coffee break, while listening to soothing music, which just may help him get through a hectic day. Thank you Jim for sharing such a great write and for you lovely comments concerning my work.:-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/6/2009 8:29:00 AM

Sounds like the beginning of a facinating story!! Nice images !!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/5/2009 5:56:00 PM

Listening to soft music wih a gun on his hip. Bit of irony there. Makes me wonder what is on his mind. Very intriguing write, Jim, and a clear image. Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/5/2009 5:39:00 PM

hopefully this observation will disappear someday, nice write, jim

Jared Pickett

Date: 7/5/2009 5:33:00 PM

short and to the point... i like it though...Good job..JP