The Point

Singing and dancing,
kissing and waiting,
missing and waisting,
her time as a single lady,
hurting the weak,
feeding off of what once was a person who didnt give in that easy,
she gave up her strength,
giving into the needle oh f***,
swerving off all the homies,
just to bang up,
she thought she was cool,
asking her self "why me, oh why,"
taking a risk everytime,
she didnt care about her life,
she didnt want to live,
but then she caught her self slipping,
So she took her self off the rig,
threw it out the car,
glad that they were finally apart,
seeing the hurt that it brought,
made her want to vomite alot,
pain in her brain, 
she thinks she is going insane,
someone please save her,
before i make a point for you to hang me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/18/2014 7:57:00 PM
thank u everybody for sharing your comments with me i appreciate it alot!! :)
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Date: 7/18/2014 4:35:00 AM
Kellee, I remember you sitting on my couch reading me this poem and I was so amazed and proud of you. Glad you are a member of Poetrysoup....Mama Linda
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Date: 7/7/2014 7:34:00 PM
Kellee,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/7/2014 1:07:00 PM
This wonderful Kellee...I get the point....you put down the wrong form...this should be free verse not acrostic...you can edit that...just go to my poems and click on this poem.....An acrostic is when the first letter of each line spells out a word(s)....hugs Tim
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Date: 7/7/2014 1:03:00 PM
- Hi Kellee - a warm welcome to P-Soup. - Nice to meet new poets. - A very well and deep written poem - Never give up hope and strength - I look forward to reading more from you in the future. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise (Norway) :)
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Date: 7/7/2014 12:41:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Kellee. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/7/2014 12:25:00 PM
Kellee, WOW.. Expressive and deep. Can't imagine being her, hope she was saved, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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