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The Poet's Fire

THE POET’S FIRE: HER PERFUME SETS THE MOOD she applied liberally onto her pulse points, a flame singed her skin the spray perfumed the air and she danced in its rain she brushed her hair, charming the mirror, turning it red, as it read her thoughts her negligee, satin and sexy, soon enough her handsome groom would feel it slip and slide over his chest she surprises him at the boudoir door his eyes tango, her hands slowly emphasize her figure, caressing the gown against her legs. her best friend blessed her with this accoutrement her new husband trembles as he asks, “when did you get this?” she smiles, flirtatiously telling him her secret he thanks her friend silently, and approaches his beating heart he slides his tee over his chest, pulls her sexiness, close and cool, heating up his throbbing pulse points her perfume nudges him into the curvature of her neck he applies kisses liberally, sensate lips brushing her skin a brush fire that grows in intensity leads to a cataclimatic* forest fire licking at the silky gown, removed in the deepening flames 9/21/2017 THE POET’S FIRE Sponsor: Greg Barden
*Cataclimatic - word made up using Cataclysm and Climax

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Date: 12/9/2017 3:57:00 PM
Wonderful, sensual imagery in your amazing poem, Kim. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2017 4:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! Hugs!
Date: 12/8/2017 10:41:00 AM
So deliciously romantic and sensuous! Congratulations on a well-deserved win, my friend! Hugs! Pandita
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2017 2:03:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita!
Date: 12/8/2017 8:54:00 AM
Sexy and delicious. After reading this, I had to take to my bed !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2017 9:58:00 AM
LOL! Thanks, Peter!
Date: 12/8/2017 7:38:00 AM
Hot hot hot! :) congratulations Kim! xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2017 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen!
Date: 12/7/2017 11:53:00 PM
This is just wonderfully sensual and so expertly penned, rife with sexy imagery and phrasing ... cool showers a must after this read! LOVED it, Kim - congratulations on SEVENTH PLACE and thank you for your patience! This contest had SO many amazing entries ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2017 7:12:00 AM
Thank you so much for you thoughtful judging of this contest and the placement. So glad you enjoyed it, Greg! <3
Date: 9/22/2017 12:32:00 AM
Aww, Greg is going to love this, I am sure of it :) Wonderful, sensual and innovative Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2017 7:17:00 AM
Thanks so much, Darren!
Date: 9/21/2017 11:41:00 PM
Loved the new word you should get that coined, Gregory R, will definitely love this one, well done Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2017 7:17:00 AM
Thanks so much, John!
Date: 9/21/2017 2:18:00 PM
OMG if the poem was a little bit longer , I thing i would not have survived dear, Kim! Haha! Fantastic writing! Exactly what the... doctor has prescribed! Good luck my friend!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2017 2:25:00 PM
LOL! I couldn't give it all away ;)
Date: 9/21/2017 12:47:00 PM
Wonderful poet's lovely fire ... Beautiful flames ... Good luck ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thanks, Probir!
Date: 9/21/2017 8:59:00 AM
A story of love and romance--lovely words weave the tale in style and emotion--best wishes Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2017 9:56:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay!
Date: 9/21/2017 8:43:00 AM
wow kim you are on fire with this passionate pen!:-) hugs jan xx
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