The Poetic Justice

As legend has it, there lived Bai Balkhash, a rich man
In the North regions of the then Soviet Kazakhstan
Had a beautiful daughter Ili who was without her Smiley
So Balkhash held a feast with a contest to win Ili.

Ili, loved a shepherd called Karatal and easily managed
For Karatal to win the contest of the grooms  staged
But Karatal followed the ancient tradition of love stories
Wherein the fathers were supposed to oppose the realities.

Now the lovers had no option but to run away and marry
And the angry father had no options to go contrary
So he turned them into rivers and himself a lake between.
Made himself a laughing stock taking water from rivers twin.

Today’s reality is Kazakhstan and China using Ili’s water
Poetic justice done, the lake drying, two rivers dying forever.

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Burlesque Form

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Dr. Ram Mehta
7th place win in:
Contest: Beloved Poem by Giorgio Veneto   -
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dey Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 6:38 AM
Congratulations on your great win....
Deschler Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 7:42 PM
A very interesting story of love that you told in this poem. Great work! Congratulations on your win, as well!
Taylor Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 12:14 PM
Outstanding, Dr Ram. Great write. Congrats. Thanks for your comment. Ralph
Adams Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 7:36 AM
great write, congrats on your win :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 11:27 PM
congrats for your win with this poem based on a legend. you are good with legends!
A  Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 2:31 PM
Dr ram, love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~
Rain Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 11:49 AM
Excellent write ! one of the reasons I love this poem, I was married to a Russian man , I speak a little Russian ..it is dear to me ..Congratulations well deserved !
Richards Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 9:40 AM
You bring so much knowledge to your poetry. Another fine example, Dr. Ram!!
A   Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 7:48 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA
Hendricks Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 6:43 PM
What a beautiful story well-told. Congratulations on your awesome win with this gem. Licia :-)
Delaney Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 4:58 PM
Followed this here from your blog......excellent and wise poem......pointing out the poetic justice. Hugs SuZ
Glover Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 1:42 PM
A poem very well written and very enjoyable to read. Good Job, Dr. Ram. Your Friend Lynn.
Pratap Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 2:02 AM
NICE WORK MY FRIEND DO READ MINE AND TELL ME HW IT IS
Thomas Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 6:31 PM
Wow a beautiful sad tale, very enjoyable read Dr mehta.... thank you for sharing and your kind comment on my poem:) peace & blessings,,Cherie
Ryerson Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 3:11 AM
I remember this gem Dr. Ram...Still reads as great as ever...Thanks for the kind comments...It's good to see you back! - Tim
Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Ahh!! Kind of a sad legend..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Larus Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 10:18 PM
Very beautiful ..... .Thoubert
A  Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 8:57 PM
Sad you are gone ~SKAT~
Konos Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 12:38 PM
Missing You.....Our Lifetime Member...
Kapoor Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 8:19 AM
How are you Dr Mehta. We all miss you a lot. Love and best wishes...Ravindra
Payne Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 9:59 PM
Lovers, and their struggles. NO matter how powerful the entity of human creation, it is but us, lovers and all.
Jones Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 3:41 PM
Very interesting write....:-)
Gigno Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 5:01 PM
!!!
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January 8, 2013 at 1:25 AM
Your fable is well told and aptly put. This is a great way to make a boring political rant into a fascinating read!
Mindova Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 8:20 AM
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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