Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

The Poetess

Words flowing like magic, explode off my page
Taking me on journeys, I didn't seek
My mind is just floating, feelings do race
Her spirit is leading, to heaven I think

Reading but living, each chosen word
Caught up in beauty, emotions I trace
My heart is a flutter, tears sometimes fall
In awe of her verses, as much as her grace

Passion and love, I can feel her heartbeat
Sorrow and pain, mistakes made again
Dancing with nature, you take me by hand
Simply you're beautiful, I'm in love with your pen

Spilling of emotions, out onto the page
Poems come alive, for sure they are real
Confide in me please, all that's concealed
My dearest poetess, you make me feel

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 30, 2015 at 12:53 AM Wow Tim, Ur words speak ur love so loud!Congrats on wonderful winning poem!

Skat A July 28, 2015 at 9:08 PM Tim, Congratulations. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A July 28, 2015 at 1:22 PM Tim, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held This Year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very old contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "EXCUSE ME" if you'd like or have the time. --I'm glad to be back on the wild side of Poetry Soup hosting, new contest. Yours Truly!!! *LINDA*

Paul Schneiter May 24, 2015 at 6:26 PM Exceptionally well done, Tim. The flow is magnificent, and the message is compelling. Wonderful!

Kim Van Breda May 13, 2015 at 12:59 PM WOW !! Tim this is something worthy of being on the list of top poems. It resonates a character in you of appreciation and love for a lucky poetess muse. How we wish we could all but that muse that inspires and brings out such a beautiful poem from your pen. xx~xx

Lindsay Laurie March 7, 2015 at 1:34 AM G'day Tim... a nice tribute for a special someone Tim. Obviously her poetry really hits a spot. Thanks mate - Lindsay

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis February 26, 2015 at 2:41 PM And I, too, feel the rhythm of each verse. Such warm regard for your muse.

Verlena S. Walker February 22, 2015 at 2:19 AM Beautiful poem Tim and congratulations on being featured as the poem of the week! Verlena

Connie Marcum Wong February 21, 2015 at 7:31 PM Nothing seems to lift my spirits like poetry does Tim and you have captured that so well in this beautifully expressive poem that is a tribute to poetess' everywhere. Congratulations on your poem being featured as POTW. It is a real treat to read! 7 and I am fav'ing this beauty! Tim Smith February 21, 2015 at 9:25 PM Thank you Connie for your great comment... I much needed one today....hugs Tim

John Fleming February 19, 2015 at 9:13 AM Well done, Tim!! Nicely penned!! :-) john Tim Smith February 19, 2015 at 9:31 AM Thank you John....cheers Tim

Eileen Manassian February 17, 2015 at 10:31 PM Yes, I read this beauty before, Tim. Congrats on POTW.... Tim Smith February 18, 2015 at 11:14 AM Thank you Eileen it is a great honor...hugs Tim

Eve Roper February 17, 2015 at 4:37 PM Congratulations on a well deserved write. It was good the first time and still good the second. Blessings dear friend Eve Tim Smith February 18, 2015 at 11:12 AM Thanks Eve...hugs Tim

Peter Lewis Holmes February 17, 2015 at 3:27 AM Tim...I feel your euphoria!...nice write...Peter Tim Smith February 17, 2015 at 9:04 AM Thank you Peter......have a terrific day.

Kp Nunez February 16, 2015 at 9:20 PM Beautiful. Congratulations, Tim. :D Kim Tim Smith February 16, 2015 at 11:39 PM Thanks Kim...hugs Tim

William Gray February 16, 2015 at 2:31 PM Great piece Tim, it fairly rolls along! >Regards Tim Smith February 16, 2015 at 11:38 PM Thanks William...cheers Tim

Terry Johnson February 16, 2015 at 10:57 AM Beautiful poem Tim Smith February 16, 2015 at 11:38 PM Thanks Terry

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 16, 2015 at 9:17 AM Wow, Congrats on being chosen TPOW!! Your admiration of the poetess and the sheer joy and inspiration you get from her words is expressed beautifully in your poem, Tim...hugs, Rhonda Tim Smith February 16, 2015 at 11:38 PM Thank you Rhonda....hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop February 15, 2015 at 11:11 PM I am so happy you've got this wonderful poem chosen as poem of the week.I am sure many of us can say the same about The poet.The poet in you does wonders!Congrats. : ) Tim Smith February 16, 2015 at 11:37 PM Thank you very much dear Charmaine.... Hugs Tim

Gary Bateman February 15, 2015 at 6:09 PM Tim, A 7+ and a FAV from me!! And My Heartfelt Congratulations on Poem of the Week. Very Well-Done!! Best Always, Gary Tim Smith February 16, 2015 at 11:34 PM Thanks Gary...hope things are well....Tim

Carrie Richards February 15, 2015 at 5:38 PM You pay such a beautiful tribute to the poetess that can make you feel such emotion! What an honor this is to her gift of poetry! :) Congratulations on the poem of the week! Tim Smith February 16, 2015 at 11:33 PM Thank you very much Carrie....hugs Tim

Sharon Gulley February 15, 2015 at 5:29 PM What a lovely write Tim, enjoyed it a lot. Happy Valentines day to You & Yours. A 7 from me. Congrats on poem of the week...Sharon G. Tim Smith February 16, 2015 at 11:28 PM Thank you Sharon....hugs Tim

Jan Allison February 15, 2015 at 7:43 AM congrats on poem of the week:-) Hugs jan x Tim Smith February 15, 2015 at 9:35 AM Thanks Jan...hugs Tim

Janet Eaton February 15, 2015 at 7:05 AM This is truly beautiful my friend. Well deserving of poem of the week. Congratulations. Tim Smith February 15, 2015 at 9:33 AM Thank you Janet...hugs Tim

Neva Romaine February 13, 2015 at 6:36 PM Dearest Tim, this is such an amazing and beautifully expressed tribute to our wonderful art form. I must say that I choose to hope that this includes me. And allow me to say that I trully consider you as one of the "Poets True" that I wrote about. If you find a free moment, give it a look. Be Blessed, Neva Tim Smith February 15, 2015 at 9:33 AM Thank you very much Neva...hugs Tim

Eve Roper February 11, 2015 at 2:19 PM Tim this is so beautiful my friend, I love the charm you have bestowed on the pen. Blessing my dear friend Eve 7 Tim Smith February 15, 2015 at 9:32 AM Thank you Eve...many blessings to you and your family...hugs Tim

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