Davina Browne Poet Limerick

The Poet Who Broke My Heart Db, Lb

Me myself and I,
Whoever we are,
You are the poet who broke my heart,
You wrote words of love,
You fitted me perfectly like a glove,
And I really pulled myself in,
Falling for myself, what a silly billy I have been,
Falling for my own words my own feelings,
But what a great lover you, I mean I was,

To the other poet who broke my heart,
LB
You wrote words of undying love,
In a way I somehow connect to you,
With the iron taste on my lips,
Dame girl you’re my drug I can’t resist, 
Capsizing my heart like a failed attempt suicide,
You brought me down to me knees,
But it’s time to give up my sweet drug,
I no longer love you,
The poet who broke my heart,



10/02/15
giggles now that was fun,
thank you skat for doing this contest,
this is all made up because LB is a wicked poet,

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Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2015 at 5:19 PM Davina, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Jan Allison May 27, 2015 at 11:32 AM Dropping back with my congrats Davina:-) Hugs jan xx

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 10:10 AM Davina Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT

Laura Breidenthal February 11, 2015 at 4:42 PM Very interesting, Davina! I like how one of those poets that broke your heart was yourself! Or at least it sounded like that. I will be reading more of your awesome work today. Glad you had fun with this one! ;) Youre a wicked poet too, in the best sense. heehee Always, Laura Davina Browne February 11, 2015 at 6:10 PM hehehe yep and the other poet who broke my heart was you LB hehe, :) bless it be

Paul Callus February 10, 2015 at 5:57 PM Lovely poem, Davina! (but not a limerick) Good thing LB does not exist...I would not have wanted to be in his shoes:) // paul Davina Browne February 11, 2015 at 4:15 AM lol I wasn't to sure what a limerick was so I just had a little fun hehe and LB is a woman hehehe was fun tho thanks paul, bless it be dee

Jan Allison February 10, 2015 at 3:01 PM Am so glad it is all made up - very vivid description - Capsizing my heart like a failed attempt suicide, - wow what an awesome line!!! hugs jan xx 7 xx Davina Browne February 11, 2015 at 4:16 AM ty jan I love making stuff up. bless it be dee