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The Poet Soldier

The mind eternal lies before us always.
Less pure in tone, we come to it drenched with life;
Fearless companion in our hour of days. 
A purity not withstanding breadth of knife. 

Away! Away! succubus death, 
much less a breach than I.
How many not mislaid in breath, 
In priceless toll, said duty to be paid.
No field of honored memories 
they preach without belie.

Captured each, and each with closed fist shouting;
Me or not, Cold or hot, we stand between as choice;
all for desperate screams grown silent.
Pastoral in the presence, of one solitary voice,
Whose form of words so hesitantly mouthing.

Whence came we witness to the stream.
Whose eyes are these that hold our field a-view?
Memories whose touch a solid scream;
Form ignored and glory gored of few.

We are not the man.
No animal or simple word defined.
We pause, we pleasure, we perform,
With speck, and all our mind deform;
Our fingers will one day unfold.
Our torrid tortured tale be told.

Yours, mine, ours, 
Drumroll spam-like dance, 
Become the gist of one more fist
To smash against the sand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/8/2021 11:07:00 AM
I love this! You know you've found a good poem when you can find a personalized meaning in someone else's personalized thought.
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