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The Poet and the Girl With Mystic Dew Hair

Her hair was as lush as life; filled with mystic dew, as the morning light I soaked in.... fingers strewn to skelatal hues, death could not pursue the love in those eyes..... Tenderly she gave me love, such love as I was due --- I pursued her (intent on dissadence) I mused --- I'd rather fight the devil with a toothpick, and give him a pawn or two; was she devine! I do confide

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Date: 3/22/2017 10:02:00 AM
Hello Keith, Dropping by again to read another one of your great poems. I really like the "Mystic Dew Hair" metaphor here. The tone and tenor of your verses combine to make this one a superb write for sure. A Seven!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 10/30/2016 8:26:00 AM
So lovely this is to read on my Sunday afternoon...Awesome.
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