The Poems I Never Wrote

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I had my eye on him since the third grade, but I never told him how I felt
Back then girls were girls, they were never meant to be cheeky or bold 
He sat behind me in math class, while he counted numbers on the board
I counted the beats of my heart each time he leaned in to ahum, cheat,

"I love the way your hair smells like rain"
he'd half whispered into his copybook 
As he copied another math answer 
he sent me thoughts laced with love

I was just a beginner with no flowery words or poems for Carlton cards 
dad always said a good girl should be sensible and be good at accounts
As my daydreams accumulated like daisies on a windblown field of gold 
I began to scrawl his name with a HB pencil, on my composition book...

"I love the way you smart me over "
he whispered a little octave higher 
as he gleamed and then tried on his own
the intricate equation of math's design

I grew up and left to live in Nevada.  For years I never set eyes on Enzo again
then one day I happened to open a magazine and there he was all grown up
He had become a bank tycoon with a boat and a car and a big orphan house 
So, I wrote him a letter and inside I added the first poem I ever wrote.

"I love it when you lean over my shoulder "
for some reason that I cannot fathom 
I get visions of you and me it a vat of grapes 
If you did not exist, I'm sure I'd make you up

as for the poems I never wrote, well, after all our years together,
when I look into his deep blue eyes, I know he knows each one by heart...

Oct 6 2022
ps: This is not for contest, the length of it did not meet the criteria, 
I hope you enjoy it anyways.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 10/8/2022 12:34:00 PM
OMG ~ what an awesome poem. I'm so glad I got to hear you read it, Mystic Rose ~ Simply beautiful.
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Date: 10/7/2022 4:18:00 PM
What a beautiful love story, I really like the details of 'daydreams accumulated like daisies' and 'visions of you and met in a vat of grapes" - hope this is a true story!
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Date: 10/7/2022 4:32:00 PM
this is partly true with some embellishment Michelle, thanks for reading
Date: 10/7/2022 8:06:00 AM
Soooooooooo sweet, Mystic!! Love it. ~ All choked up
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Date: 10/7/2022 4:32:00 PM
Thank you for reading Gershon, young love first love
Date: 10/7/2022 7:13:00 AM
A lovely romantic story, Vienna. Of course he know the poems you never wrote--love has the power!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/7/2022 4:31:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, for reading, and yes when hearts are connected no words are needed, it's in the eyes of the beholder,
Date: 10/6/2022 11:44:00 PM
A romantic tale.
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Date: 10/7/2022 3:47:00 AM
indeed it is Victor my favorite kind :)
Date: 10/6/2022 5:25:00 PM
I did enjoy it Vie, loved your theme. a Favorite for me... Thanks for sharing....
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Date: 10/6/2022 6:32:00 PM
Thanks Michael, love story telling, its my fav partt of poetry
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