The Plot Thickens

Why did He knit so many twits? (Weak of Mind and lacking wits) No Thoughts of their own- Like Sheep and their Clones: Well, what's the point of it? Does He live His life through His Creations, Feeling every single sensation? He's in every Atom we can fathom- (One never knows what will happen) And that's the Truth of it!

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/9/2014 1:47:00 AM

"Does HE live His life through His Creations?"- I get stuck on that thought quite a bit. Why would an Almighty, All knowing, Perfect Thing need to test and live through tiny creations? I can Dig this piece...

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 9/26/2014 9:56:00 AM

Love that line, "like sheep and their clones", where does stuff like that come from? There are so many great lines here, but what a great amusing whole.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/13/2014 1:11:00 AM

Are we in control of our own destinies, or is there something, or someone, greater than us, who is pulling on the "puppet-strings"?.... I think we all want to know these answers. This is a very thought-provoking write, BP. Well done! :)