The Place That Waits

When I first arrived at that place,
 Its splendor stole breath from me 
 Trees cast their shivering shadows
 In a languid, sloth-veiled mystery.
I came anew after fifteen lone rains,
 Yet naught appeared to change.
 I repose alone till, stirred in vision,
 A presence dim, vague, and strange.
 One from my ancient reappeared 
 It seemed that one wandered near,
 I only asked the ponderous mind:
 Where are those who were here?
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Faure Avatar
March 27, 2026 at 1:32 PM
Enjoyed very much!
Alhemaidy Avatar
March 27, 2026 at 1:25 PM
Hello Ajay Mukherjee :-) Very interesting read and deep write! Well enjoyed! Have a nice day lovely Ajay with best regards!
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